Sunday, January 30, 2022

THE ENTERPRISE FINDS THE LOST HUMAN COLONIES OF THE HORATIUS SYSTEM

 


Name: Mission To Horatius

Author: Mark Reynolds

Publication Date: 9/1968

Publisher: Whitman Publishing

Page Number: 210

Historian’s Note: Sometime between season 2 and season 3 of classic Star Trek

Cast of Characters:  Captain James T. Kirk    Commander Spock             Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Nyota Uhura          Lieutenant DePaul          Lieutenant Peterson        Lieutenant Freeman         Lieutenant Kellum             Lieutenant Masaryk           Nurse Christine Chapel          Ensign Pavel Chekov      Yeoman First Class Janice Rand           Yeoman Second Class Doris Atkins         Yeoman Second Class Thompkins             Crewman Dick       Grang of the Wolf Clan            Shaman Muel of the Wolf Clan           Pater Delvin                           Pater Stuart                     Extreme Holy Warren                Feldherr Jodl                 Oberst Muller              Nummer Ein Shickle                Anna Shickle

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701

Planets: Neolithia, Mythra, and Bavarya

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The book begins with McCoy stepping on to the bridge. He wants to know why they were being rerouted when they had been scheduled for some shore leave.  The reason McCoy is so concerned is he thinks there may be an outbreak of space cafard.  Cafard is a condition of space madness the space travelers get when they are overly board for long periods of time.  It used to be triggered by having no artificial gravity.  Since they have artificial gravity, it is not as common a problem anymore.  However, it is going to be part of a minor ongoing subplot for the rest of the book.  Also, Sulu has a pet mouse that snuck in his uniform shirt.  Sulu, in addition to botany, likes to get specimens of animals from planets they explore.  Although this little guy is just a mouse who Sulu named Mickey adding a bit a comic relief to the book.  

McCoy concerned about Cafard

The main story is the Enterprise has a secret mission given to them by Starfleet.  They are to proceed to the Horatius system. When they arrive, they are able to read their secret orders.  The Enterprise enters the Horatius system so it is time to look at the orders.  Starfleet has received a distress call from this system.  In the system are three planets, Neolithia, Mythra, and Bavarya, each world was settled by humans who had left Earth before the formation of the Federation.  Their mission is to explore these worlds and discover who is seeking their help.

The first planet the visit is Neolithia.  It turns out the humans who went to this planet seem to have reverted back to the stone age.  While there the away team is attacked by a young teenager who they quickly stun.  When he wakes, he identifies himself as Grang of the Wolf Clan.  Grang is an interesting character and provides a good deal of comic relief with his misunderstanding for Starfleet human nomenclature.  He often identifies Enterprise crew members as “Captain of the Kirks” or “Doctor of the McCoys.” 

Captain Kirk needs to get to the bottom of this

Almost being stereotypical space aliens Kirk has Grang “take them to his leader.”  Grange warns they will be killed.  When they get to the leader, who is referred to as a wizard-doctor of the Council of Patriarchs, it turns out really does have powers of a telepathic nature.  He tries to execute for the landing party for their “crimes.” It appears there have been these raiders from space attacking and the Council think its Kirk and company.  An army of men seem ready to kill the leaning party with arrows.  Spock is the only one who senses that the archers are not real.  The wizard-doctor’s powers only extend to fellow descendants of Earth and Spock’s Vulcan half protects him.  With his illusion destroyed the wizard doctor retreats.  Had Spock not called this out the landing party would have suffered “the silent death.”  Now, according to Grang, they were going to get their actual physical warriors. 

Since Kirk is now convinced the people of this planet did not send the distress signal and clearly don’t want them around it is time for them to leave.  Sulu protests seeing as they can’t abandon their ally Grang, who the wizard-doctor threatened with death.  Kirk points out that according to general order # 1 they can’t take him for that would be interference.  It sucks for Grang but those are the breaks.  However, when they beam back up it turns out Grang came along anyway.  The device that Kirk had Sulu set up to capture a specimen of animal life, turns out it “captured” Grang.  It is implied that Mr. Sulu told Grang about it and where to go.  Kirk, who isn’t really angry, let’s Sulu know that watching Grang will be his responsibility.  So “the Lieutenant of the Sulus” becomes Grang’s ship buddy. 

Sulu looking out for Grang!

The Enterprise then heads to Mythra.  This planet is capable of communicating with the Enterprise as it has radio technology, however they were quite surprised when the starship popped in to say hello.  The Mythraian officials put Kirk in contact with their leader a man named Warren who is the Supreme Exarch, Extreme Holy of the United Temple.  He tells Kirk to take the ship away, but Kirk insists that they are there to see who is sent the distress signal and who is attacking Neolithia.  Once he has cleared them the ship will leave.  He also points out that it is against their orders to interfere with their internal affairs.    

Kirk leads an away team down to the planet.  They are greeted and their hosts ask if they have had their anodyne yet.  Anodyne is part of their religion in worshiping “The Ultimate.”  McCoy scans it and finds that it is laced with a drug that will make its victims mind zombies for a day.  The government has this entire population outside the leadership in an intoxicated state.  Chekov had some and becomes one of their mind slaves.  Kirk orders an emergency beam out.  Since it is clear these people neither sent the distress signal nor are attacking Neolithia—in fact are victims of such attacks themselves—Kirk decides to move on to the next planet.  However, before they leave McCoy puts an antidote to the anodyne in the water.  So much for the prime directive.    

They get to the last planet Bavarya.  This planet actually has space capabilities and is none too happy to have the Enterprise around. Bavarya demands the Enterprise get lost but Kirk points out they are not in their space, as apparently intergalactic space governments only recognize a planets ability to claim space so far from itself and the Enterprise is outside of Bavarua’s legal claims.  Bavarya attacks but their phasers are no match for the Enterprise’s shields. Kirk points out that the Federation has more scientists so their technology is better. 

The Bavaryan leader, a man named Nummer Ein, reluctantly agrees to let a landing party from the Enterprise come to their planet to investigate the attacks. Kirk has Grang dress in an ensign’s uniform and he accompanies the landing party.  After they beam down Grang can confirm that these are the people who attacked his planet.  The whole place has a Nazi-Germany vibe to it.

They meet a young woman named Anna Shickle and she is the one who sent the distress signal.  Before they can find out why they discover that Nummer Ein never intended to treat Kirk and his crew as guests instead he choices to hold them as hostages until they hand over the Enterprise and its technology to them.  With the planet’s phasers targeted at the Enterprise, the crew can’t lower its shields to beam back the landing party.

To make them comply Nummer Ein decides to have them complete in gladiator matches.  The fighters are Kirk, Spock, and Grang.  Since Kirk is the greatest fighter in the galaxy, Spock has enhanced strength and gladiator experience, and Grang isn’t sloppy himself, they make quick work out of their three opponents.  However, every time they win their opponents are taking away only to return moments later fully restored.  The three keep wining however so Nummer Ein decides for a break.  The three are taken down to their cell only to by saved by Anna Shickle who was able to get Yeoman Rand her phaser.  With the Starfleet officers and Grang all armed they learn the truth of Bavarya.  They manufacture their underclass: the Doppelgangers by way of cloning.  Except they can’t replicate the soul.  So, the upper class, the Herr Elite, has a bunch of soulless servants waiting on them hand and foot.  Until Anna learned that her father, Nummer Ein had been replaced by one.  This would indicate that the Doppelgangers are capable for much more than we are told.  However, we never explore this.  Anna explains that the Doppelgangers are all connected to a machine that generates them.  Kirk destroys the machine making all the Doppelgangers disappear.  Bavarya no longer has the man-power to harass the other planets but also now the Herr Elite will have to work for themselves for a change.

Spock with gladiator experience 

  

They return to the Enterprise and bring Grang home where he is welcome as a hero for stopping the raids from outer space.  McCoy discovers that Sulu’s pet mouse got loose and maybe carrying the bubonic plague.  So, the whole ship searches for the missing rodent and it turns out to be a gag.  Dr. McCoy was despite to find a cure for space cafard made the whole thing up with the senior staff in order to get the crew excited again.   

Additional thoughts: The only Star Trek novel published when the series was actually on the air.  The book was released right as season 3 was getting started. I bought my copy in 1999 under the banner of “the lost Star Trek novel, out of print for more than 30 years.” It was a great add to my collection.  The story is mostly told from the point of view of Captain Kirk but sometimes shifts to Dr. McCoy and an omniscient narrator. 

The main adventure is rather interesting the ship being called to a system where there are three human settlements who have been separated from the rest of humanity for so long that they evolved into an entirely different cultures that are like us but not like us. Each planets name has a special meaning the to the culture that is there.  Neolithia, clearly is from the word Neolithic which is a period of human civilization that represents the end of the stone age and the beginning of agriculture.  Bavarya comes from Bavaria a former German kingdom and modern-day German province. This planet is under a fascist regime that claims to be descended from the elite of the Teutonic peoples.   I am not really sure where Mythra gets its name but considering it was run by a religious cult it probably has something to do with that.

The prime directive comes up in this book which left me confused.  Why would the prime directive be applicable to humans? They are part of us not some alien culture.  It is also applied very haphazardly.  Kirk is about to abandon poor Grang because taking him would be a violation of the prime directive.  However, Kirk doesn’t hesitate to free the people of Mythra from the drug induced mind-control that their government was imposing and he outright destroys all the Doppelgangers.  You can try to make a “not developing argument” such as “The Return of the Archons” and “The Apple” but I feel that is a bit of a reach. 

There are some interesting errors in the book such as referring to the Romulan Star Empire as the Romulan Confederation, and referring to the Enterprise as a space ship and not a star ship.  Also, there is a huge typo when Kirk is telling Chekov on page 143 to “report to the bridge” it is typed out as “repair to the bridge.

The book could have done without the whole space canard and Mickey misadventure.  It really was a huge waste of space.   The author really should have spent more time on Bavarya.  The whole Herr Elite ruling over the Doppelgangers, who they regard as having no souls despite the fact that one of them has appeared to have replaced their leader. This is the source of a great story.  Unfortunately, it is brushed over to spend more time with canard and space mice.  In the end of the day why would anyone on the Enterprise get bored to the point of sickness?

Even though it was a book it was nice to see the whole cast.  Since Janice Rand disappeared in the early first season, it meant we never saw her interact with some of the new characters added later such as Ensign Chekov.  She even had an important part to play getting Kirk and Spock out of that dungeon.   

Missed you, Yeoman

Should it be canon: Now since the status of the books as any sort of canon is the matter some contention, we should ask ourselves “should this be” canonical material.  I really liked where they discussed “space law” describing it like we would discuss “national waters.”  In my opinion, despite its flaws yes it should be.  It is good adventure for the crew, it fits right in with the series for which it is based. I would find this to be a fine addition to the Star Trek mythos.

Cover Art: The art of cover I find to be okay, but nothing more than that.  It consists of a full color drawing of the Enterprise on the front with a drawing of Kirk and Spock behind it.  The image of the Captain and First Officer are not colored in rather they appear as drawings on a blueish back ground.  

Final Grade: 3 of 5

Saturday, January 22, 2022

KIRK AND SPOCK MEET LINCOLN AND SURAK

Episode Title:  The Savage Curtain

Air Date: 3/7/1969

Written by Arthur Heinemann and Dorothy C. Fontana 

Directed by Herschel Daugherty

Cast: William Shatner as Captain James T. Kirk    Leonard Nimoy as Commander Spock             DeForest Kelley as Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              James Doohan  as Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        George Takei  as Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Nichelle Nichols as Lieutenant Nyota Uhura          Bill Blackburn as Lieutenant Hadley        Roger Holloway as Lieutenant Lemli           Arell Blanton as Lieutenant Dickerson              Majel Barrett as Nurse Christine Chapel          Walter Koenig as Ensign Pavel Chekov      Lee Bergere as President Abraham Lincoln          Barry Atwater as Surak                        Phillip Pine as Colonel Green        Carol Daniels as Zora               Bob Herron as Kahless                 Nathan Jung  as Ghengis Khan   Bart La Rue as Yarnek (voice)      Janos Prohaska as Yarnek (body)

Ships: USS Enterprise NCC-1701

Planets: Excalbia

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The Enterprise is surveying what appears to be a rather boring planet.  Just as they were getting ready to leave their systems go haywire.  While trying to address this they receive a communication from Abraham Lincoln, the 16th President of the United States who at this point had been dead for over 400 years.  Lincoln assures the crew he is who he appears to be.  A patch of the planet Excalbia, suddenly transforms into an Earth-like environment and Lincoln requests to be brought aboard.  A request that Kirk decides to grant.  

Lincoln on the Enterprise!

Kirk arranges Lincoln to be brought up with full presidential honors.  This means that all the senior officers will be in dress uniforms and they will have music playing when the President arrives. Scotty, who can’t get in touch with sheer absurdity of what is going on, notices the scanner doesn’t pick up a human at first then suddenly does.   Lincoln is now on board and he has a lot of questions about the 23rd century from recorded music, to the transporter, to the Enterprise traveling the stars.  Kirk explains as best he can.  As he brings the President around there is a cringe scene with Uhura that I will go into later.  He also informs Spock that on the planet he will meet a great Vulcan. 


Later in the conference room the senior staff, despite being time travelers themselves, seem to think the idea of Lincoln being here in the 23rd is just impossible.  Mr. Spock points out that Abraham Lincoln was Captain Kirk's personal hero.  They may be dealing with aliens who have the power to create illusions out of our own thoughts.  Now they have seen that before a fact that Kirk is well aware because of Spock.     

Meeting on Lincoln

Kirk decides that he and Spock will accompany Lincoln to the planet’s surface.  When they arrive the find themselves greeted by an ancient Vulcan named Surak. Surak was the founder of Vulcan civilization and philosophy.  To Spock this is his Abe Lincoln, George Washington, and Jesus all rolled into one.  Spock denies this can be Surak but the man plays his part well.  Then a rock comes to life and introduces himself as Yarnek.  Yarnek's people like to watch plays of alien philosophies.  They know of the human concept of good and evil and they would like to know which is stronger.  Kirk and Spock were given their two respective heroes for their team.  Yarnek brings in some villains: Colonel Green, a fascist from World War III; Kahless the Unforgettable, founder of the Klingon Empire; Zora of Tiburon, known for experiments on humanoids; and Genghis Khan, founder of the Mongol Empire in the 12th century.  The two side are to fight so the Excalbians can see who is truly superior. 


Kirk and Spock refuse to cooperate at first but the Excalbians revel that they have the power to destroy the Enterprise and right now have disabled it.  If Kirk and Spock don’t win to will be curtains for the crew, who get to watch as the Captain has to fight for their fate again.  Colonel Green starts a conversation with Kirk reminding him that the Excalbians are the true enemies.  Kirk remembers that Green likes to attack during negotiations and this version it true to form.  The “good” force fights back and retreats to a more fortified position.  Lincoln and Kirk discuss strategy where Lincoln remarks that Kirk reminds him of General Grant. 



Surak isn’t not a warrior and would like to try to negotiate.  Kirk tries to tell him that such a gesture with the characters they are facing would be pointless.  Surak is a man of peace and must attempt it.  This works as well as one would expect it to and Surak is captured and tortured.  The remaining three form a rescue plan.   Kirk and Spock attack while Lincoln goes around to rescue Surak.  This was a good plan but unfortunately Surak isn’t just captured he is dead.  Kahless, it seems, can imitate voices. Lincoln is stabbed in the back with a spear but lives long enough to warn Kirk and Spock.  The two press their attack and kill Green and Kahless.  Khan and Zora retreat.  Yarnek returns disappointed that he didn’t learn anything.  Kirk and Spock couldn’t care less and are glad to leave.  In the end they reflect on the experience and how it was kind of cool to meet their heroes exactly as they were in their mind.  

Surak in person

Additional thoughts: This is why classic Star Trek is my favorite version of the franchise.  You can’t beat the original.  Lincoln showing up who would have thought?  Apollo one season and Lincoln the next, this series is one that always keeps you on your toes.  We also got to meet the founder of all Vulcan civilization, Surak.  Seeing the one who Spock described as the “greatest of us all” and his reaction to it was a treat.

Yarnek

So, Kirk’s great hero is Lincoln.  I wonder where Lincoln ranks in comparison to Garth of Izar.  I am assuming Lincoln is ranked higher since he didn’t try to kill Kirk, and it was he who the Excalbians recreated. (Wouldn’t it have been funny if they brought Garth of Izar?  Imagine Kirk’s reaction to seeing him on the viewscreen.)  I think it is awesome that Kirk holds real-life Lincoln in such high regard it shows a number of different things.  It shows that Kirk is something of history buff and he has good taste.  I too am a fan of Mr. Lincoln and have read a number of books about him.  I read this one, this one, and this one here.  He is the only president who accomplished more that than what he set out to do[1] and did so much to change the nation for the better.  In way he re-founded it.

Bad guy team

Okay so let’s talk about Lincoln’s big faux pax in the episode.  That is went he goes to talk with Lt. Uhura and uses a very outdated term that I won’t repeat here.   The term was acceptable in Lincoln’s day but was falling far out of use by the time this episode was airing.  Fortunately for Lincoln, Lt. Uhura has grown up in a society where her blackness was never something that was used against her.  Old fashioned racism is to the Lieutenant as feudalism is to me as white person.  I understand it intellectually but I was never forced to experience it.  For if that word was said at any point in my lifetime our dear 16th President would have been knocked on his butt.  What I find really interesting is that Lincoln didn’t need to be told he had made a mistake.  He all of a sudden knew as if the information had been directly transferred to his brain.  If I was Lincoln I would have been pissed, a warning before would have been nice.  Words change and over time words that may not have been offensive may suddenly become so.  So, imagine you travel 400 years into the future and you now have a superpower that causes any time you say a word that in the last few centuries had become a slur, your brain instantly knows you did really wrong.  As opposed to one that would just give you an updated lists of things you can and cannot say in polite society.

Lincoln is lucky the Lieutenant is such an understanding person

So, when they sent out the representatives for evil why Col. Green and not Adolf Hitler?  After all it wouldn’t be the first time Kirk and Spock had to face off against some Nazi.  I also didn’t understand why the likes of Kahless and Khan would have followed the orders of Green.  Wouldn’t one of them had been a better choice as leader?  After all they were actually successful in what they were trying to do historically. 

Good guy team

Personally, I could have done without the whole “good vs. evil” battle.  I think it would have been better for the four of them to work together to figure out why it was Lincoln and Surak had been displaced in time.  Ultimately have them triumph over the Excalbians and allow Lincoln and Surak to return to their own time.  I wish Kirk had pressed Lincoln more about what he remembered about himself.  Did he know of his own death or that his efforts to save the Union succeeded in the long term?  Having Lincoln and Surak be forced to make the choice to go back knowing what happens to them could have been very interesting indeed.  The mystery and the decision could have allowed the characters of Lincoln and Surak to shine more.  

Being sneaky 

Okay what has all this about “converting into minutes” about.  They have been using hours, minutes, and seconds for the entire series by this point.  Stupid writing error. I wonder if Scotty is just bad with history or another writing error when he fails to account that Lincoln was four not three centuries ago. 

FINAL GRADE 4 of 5



[1] James K. Polk did exactly what he set out to do—the only other president besides Lincoln—but Lincoln achieved far more than his initial goals.

Saturday, January 8, 2022

KIRK, SPOCK, AND MCCOY MEET A VERY OLD MAN AND HIS ROBOTS

 


Episode Title:  Requiem for Methuselah

Air Date: 2/14/1969

Written by Jerome Bixby

Directed by Murray Golden

Cast: William Shatner as Captain James T. Kirk    Leonard Nimoy as Commander Spock             DeForest Kelley as Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              James Doohan  as Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        Nichelle Nichols as Lieutenant Nyota Uhura          Naomi Newman as Lieutenant Rahda              Bill Blackburn as Lieutenant Hadley     Roger Holloway as Lieutenant Lemli   James Daly as Flint           Louise Sorel as Rayna Kapec         

Ships: USS Enterprise NCC-1701

Planets:  Holberg 917-G

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The Enterprise has a pandemic on the ship. Rigelian fever has infected twenty-six crew members and has killed three.  If this isn’t solved soon the entire crew will be infected and most likely die.  So, in desperation they head to the uninhabited planet Holberg 917-G because of its source of ryetalyn, a rare element that is the key ingredient of the antidote. 

Saved by Flint

Shortly after beaming down they are attacked by a robot that can neutralize their phasers.  An older gentleman arrives, and identifies himself by the name Flint.  He breaks off the robot’s attack and demands they leave.  Kirk explains that they really can’t leave that they need ryetalyn or they will all die.  Flint is not very sympathetic and he and Kirk start threatening each other.  This all ends when McCoy makes a reference to the Black Plague.  This stops Flint cold and, almost if recalling a memory, he talks of rats infecting people.  He apologizes and sends his helpful robot to gather the substance that the Enterprise needs.


Flint invites the three to his castle.  When they get inside the three of them, especially Spock, are amazed at his art collection.  Spock identifies the paintings by their brush stokes as works of Leonardo Di Vinci, yet these works were unknown.  Upon further observations Spock discovers sheet music that is the clear work of Johannes Brahms.  This eventually drives Spock to drink as he downs a brandy.

Nasty robot

It turns out that Flint isn’t alone on Holberg.  He introduces the three men to Rayna, who he claims to have been raising since she was a small child after her parents were killed.  The young woman is both beautiful and extremely intelligent.  She impressed Spock with her interest in science.  She also appears to have captured the heart of Captain Kirk.   Flint seems to encourage the Kirk/Rayna flirtation even arranging for them to dance.


Flint’s robot finishes the processing of the ryetalyn but it did a bad job and the stuff is now useless.  It will have to redo it; McCoy is now going to supervise but now they are pressed for time.  It is not the only bad thing that the robot does.  When Kirk and Rayna start to get too friendly it attacks only to be destroyed by Spock.  This isn’t much of a problem because Flint has spares.  

Spock suspects something is up

Rayna confronts Flint about the bad robot claiming she could not have summoned it as she was not frightened. She accuses him of trying to kill Kirk, which he outright denies and then says she needs to say farewell for the Starfleet officers will be leaving. Rayna goes to see Kirk to say goodbye, but he kisses her and asks her to leave with. Troubled she retreats insisting she loves him.

Kirk and Rayna hitting it off

The three officers invade Flint’s private lab.  In the lab McCoy finds the processed reytalyn ready to go.  It seems Flint is trying to keep them there.  They then decide to enter the room that earlier Rayna said she was not allowed to go.  Spock tries to enter himself but Kirk insists and that is when they all learn the truth: Rayna is an android.  This lab is filled with different versions of Rayna all with their own assigned number.

Growing closer

  Flint shows up and they confront him.  It turns out the man has another big secret: he is immortal.  He began life as Akharin in 3834 BC, and he lived as a solider.  In a battle he received what should have been a fatal injury but it turns out his body has amazing regenerative powers.  For thousands of years, he would adopt new identities and discard them before anyone suspected.  He knew many of humankind’s greatest figures and was others.  In his long life he was King Solomon, Alexander the Great, Lazarus, Merlin, Leonardo Di Vinci, and Johannes Brahms.  He married thousands of times but desires and immortal companion like himself.  This is the reason for Rayna.  However, he needs the three men from the Enterprise in order to help Rayna achieve her full humanity.

Yesterday's Rayna

  When they try to leave, Flint revels his power and transports the entire starship Enterprise from space to his lap shrunk down to table top size.  On the ship, Scotty and the rest see on the viewscreen what appears to be a giant Captain Kirk looking down at them.  Things are looking quite bad for the crew.

Kirk and Rayna dancing

Rayna arrives and she confronts Flint.  She proclaims that although she is grateful for what Flint has done for her in her life, she is her own person and her life belongs only to her and that means she gets to choose.  She chooses to be with Captain Kirk and she plans to leave with him.   Kirk is cheering her on and after that wonderful speech on female empowerment she promptly drops down dead.   Apparently, the agony of choosing between following her heart and going with Kirk and betraying the man who had made her thing was had caused her circuits to fry ending her life.  Or it could be she just shorted out due to a design flaw, there was a whole room full of dead Raynas in the closet, maybe they just don’t last long.  

Table top Enterprise

Everything is restored.  The Enterprise is put back into space at the right size and McCoy is able to distribute the cure to everyone in time.  We also find out that by leaving Earth, Flint left the environment that gave him his immortality. He is now slowly dying.  According to McCoy he is fine with it and will dedicate his remaining time to trying to help humanity.  The only problem is Captain Kirk, he is broken hearted over the death of Rayna.  He is so sad that Spock thinks his depression will destroy him.  So, Spock does a mind-meld to make him forget Rayna ever existed.

Additional thoughts: So, I want to start by talking about the immortal Flint.  The idea of a man from ancient times who accidently discovers he is immortal and spends his long-life assuming various identities until they ‘die,’ all while rubbing elbows with some of the most famous figures throughout history is a fascinating idea worth exploring.  Due to his long life, he has a castle with a unique priceless treasures created by humanities greatest minds.  It is a great idea.  What I don’t like however is going beyond saying that he knew great figures of history to saying he was the great figures of history and myth.  Alexander the Great, Leonardo Di Vinci, and Johannes Brahms were fascinating people in their own right and shouldn’t be cheapened by pretending they were all the same immortal.  Each came from real families, had real childhoods, and grew up to accomplished great things.  It would fine to say Flint influenced them but don’t say he was them.  I have this feeling when picking historical figures, they probably just picked the first few names that came to mind.  After all, two of the people they mentioned Lazarus and Merlin weren’t even real.  

Kirk's own true love-no mind wipe needed

   
    Kirk falling so hard for Rayna makes absolutely no sense what so ever and is extremely terrible writing on Bixby’s part.  He knew this woman less than four hours.  Why is so in love with her?  He spent weeks with Edith Keeler and months with Miramanee, so it was easy for me to understand Kirk’s devotion to them.  Yet what is the basis for Rayna?  I don’t see any chemistry.  Is that it though? Is Kirk being drugged again?  Like in the cases of Elaan and Nona?  That might have explained it but we didn’t see any of that.

When Kirk has lost his great loves before, such as Edith Keeler and Miramanee, he just worked to move past it.  Even while drugged he recovered by re-committing himself to his ship, as Spock pointed out, just as Elaan was forced to leave the Enterprise.   So now however Kirk is so wounded by his lost love it is feared he will never recover, (although he seems fine) so Spock decides to do an involutory mind meld and wipe out the memory of her from Kirk’s mind.  I wonder if this co-character assassination on Kirk and Spock served as inspiration of the co-character assassination on Superman and Lois Lane in Superman II.  

Chemically induced to like her but go over her by recommitting to the Enterprise

Considering Flint is a human who seems to have recently left Earth, the source of his immortality, where did he get all this cool technology?  He was able to turn the Enterprise into desktop decoration.  That is some power!  How did he get it?  At the end of the episode McCoy states that he is dedicating his life to helping humanity, well why (I am breaking my own blog rule here) do we never see this technology in Federation hands for the rest of the Star Trek franchise?   Also, if Flint wanted an immortal android companion so badly, Kirk should have just directed him to the planet Mudd.

In the end the story is a good idea: the immortal man so lonely that he seeks to create a perfect companion, but the execution falls short.

FINAL GRADE 2 of 5