THE SEARCH FOR SPOCK, THE BOOK

 

Name: The Search for Spock   

Author: Vonda N. McIntyre

Publication Date: 6/1984

Publisher: Pocket Books (Star Trek #17)

Page Number: 297

Historian’s Note:  NA

Cast of Characters:  Rear Admiral James T. Kirk       Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”       Commander Hikaru Sulu              Commander Nyota Uhura              Commander Pavel Chekov         Commander Max Arrunja           Lieutenant Commander Kyle                Dr. Christine Chapel          Lieutenant Commander Janice Rand                Lieutenant  Saavik            Lieutenant (Junior Grade) Foster        Fleet Admiral Harrison Morrow                    Captain J.T. Esteban                    Commander Miguel Darby                            Captain Lawrence H. Styles                  Lieutenant (junior grade) Heisenberg                    Dr. David Marcus              Commander Kruge          Torg            Maltz               Ambassador Sarek                    Valkris             T’Mei        T’Lar  

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, USS Grissom NCC-638, USS Excelsior NX-2000, Earth Spacedock, IKS B'rel

Planets: Earth, Genesis Planet, and Vulcan

My Spoiler filled summary and review: Since this is a review of the book version of the movie Star Trek III: The Search for Spock, there is no need to provide a summary of the story as I already did that in my last review.  So, I am just going to focus on the differences between the book and the movie.

1.       The opening scene is during a wake for Spock and the rest of the dead.  This scene is not in the movie, in fact I would say 2/3 of this book is material not in the movie.  The wake is a disaster, bad alcohol is served, and everyone is messed up.  Kirk tries to revive his old relationship with Carol and gets shot down.  Carol becomes angry and revels that she had a boyfriend recently who was one of the scientists killed by Khan. Their son David is luckier in his love life as he ends up sleeping with Saavik.  We learn the reason Spock’s coffin survived is because Saavik altered its course. Instead of Spock’s body burning up in the atmosphere she placed it to be absorbed by the genesis wave.   

2.       Sulu is a captain in the book and referred to such throughout even though in the movie he is just a commander.  

3.       In the book Kirk and David’s relationship still is not reconciled with Kirk reaching out but David continuing to slap him away.  David’s personality often comes up in the book as just a spoiled brat where in the movies he is just helpful. 

4.       The Grissom shows up and its Captain Esteban, not Admiral Marrow, who tells them Genesis has become a hot topic and Starfleet has classified everything.  It turns out Kirk and Esteban go far back, and Esteban has a long list of accomplishments that proceed Starfleet trusting him with this assignment. 

5.       Carol Marcus refuses to help the Grissom investigate Genesis as she has to contact the relatives of her team who were killed by Khan.  She has lots of services to go to that are her priority.

6.       David fights to get himself invited to go with the Grissom.  This makes Kirk sad because David didn’t want to spend time with him.

7.       McCoy’s break into Spock’s quarters is not the first sign something is wrong with McCoy; it is rather the final cumulation of what was a growing problem.  McCoy muttering stuff in Spock’s voice to both Kirk and Saavik on a number of occasions.   

8.       Kruge and Valkris are not together like the movie implies.  The book versions never meet.

9.       Scotty had further objections to going to the Excelsior.  One being his nephew’s funeral.

10.   There is an interesting scene where Scotty’s niece says she wouldn’t trust Kirk because both times he went back to the Enterprise the Captain died.  

11.   Kirk informs Sarek on stronger terms about why he didn’t bring Spock’s body back to Genesis.  In the movie Kirk is unaware of this even being an issue.  Where in the book the reason he acted as he did is that the Vulcan people had often mistreated Spock and therefore, he felt no obligation to follow their wishes over Starfleet customs. 

12.   Kruge killing of subordinate is less of a random scene.  In the movie, after the destruction of the Grissom, Kruge killing his gunner is something done in sudden anger.  Where in the book the gunner is ordered to undergo a ritual suicide.  He refuses and is then vaporized via Klingon disruptor. 

13.   Explains that Uhura locked the young Lieutenant in the closet so that he wouldn’t get in trouble for their actions.  It also shows that Sarek helped Uhura get off Earth and to Vulcan.

14.   When Kruge orders the death of one of the prisoners the Klingon on the ground tries to get Saavik to take her own life she attempts to escape, and David is killed in the struggle.  

15.   Klingon landing party start hearing the countdown as soon as they get onboard.  Which makes them seem stupider.  Maybe they should have called about the counting beforehand?   

16.   After they escape Saavik clears the way on Starfleet channels their captured Klingon ship to make it to Vulcan.

17.   The risks of refusion are explained in greater detail. The biggest is that no one has tried this science antiquity, and they don’t know that the result was.  Most of the time the dead Vulcan body doesn’t suddenly come alive again, so no refusion attempt is even tried.

Requesting refusion

  

Additional thoughts: When I read the novelization of The Wrath of Khan, I found myself wondering if the differences between the book and movie were based on changes to the screen play that were made by making the film.  With this book I feel a little different.  The differences that the book version of TWK had compared to the film are still present in this book.  For example, in this book Kirk still didn’t know David was his son until Carol told him in the Genesis Cave, David and Saavik continuing their relationship, and Sulu is a captain.  It is if the author wanted to book continuity to line up regardless of what when on in the film.  I will acknowledge that the books line up well and if you are just the reader should be satisfied.  However, in order to continue the books’ themes, it causes larger diversions as we go forward.  As such, we get almost halfway through this book before we get to content that we saw on screen.

One of these continuity questions is the author’s “Captain Sulu” obsession.  She describes him as a Captain despite the fact that in both films Sulu was a commander and wore said uniform.  Also, in this book the author acts like Sulu was already in command of the Excelsior prior to TWOK.  This doesn’t add up with the films because in TWOK Sulu is clearly an instructor at Starfleet Academy, as he is seen on the bridge simulator during the Kobayashi Maru test.  It doesn’t make sense for him to leave his command to go on a training cruise as a favor to Kirk.  The book goes so far to suggest that Sulu even had a hand in designing the vessel.  Sulu’s background is in space aviation and botany.  Captain Styles is not Sulu’s predecessor but rather the man who stole his ship.  It comes off as so weird.

I like the addition of Saavik being responsible for Spock’s body’s survival.  That’s the type of addition that novelization can bring.  It would have taken too long in the movie for Saavik to explain her decision-making process, especially when all Spock’s body is survived. The quick gravity-well soft landing is fine for the movie, but the book allows for greater detail.  I also like the explanation of why David is on the mission and his mother is not.  One of them goes to Genesis and the other took care of making sure their friends and colleagues received proper burials and family notifications.

David and Saavik romantic couple in the books

   There are elements of the book I don’t care for such as David’s beef with his father.  Book David often comes off as jerk in a way movie David didn’t.  It makes less sense in the book for him to be this be this way, seeing as his father had no idea he existed until recently.  Unlike the movie version who did.  The book’s tragedy is that Kirk never resolved the issues with his son, where in the movie the tragedy is losing a son so soon after reestablishing contact.

A character about to be lost

Another element I didn’t particularly care for, although others may like it, is the author devoting so much time to characters who don’t matter.  I didn’t need Valkris’s entire backstory which included the struggles with the alcoholic brother and her difficulties leading her house.  Nor did I care at all for Carol’s lover Vince Mason’s family’s reaction to him being killed by Khan, and his personal contributions the Genesis project.  Also, Carol is bit of a cougar as her lover has David’s age.   We also go some clearly non canon reference to these Galaxy-class ships that can go literally to other galaxies, as the rest of the franchise note that is still quite impossible by Starfleet abilities.

One thing I really did like is David pointing out how this was not the ideal Genesis experiment.  That the device was not supposed to be activated inside a starship that itself was inside a nebula.  Genesis is still untested; I think it deserved a legitimate test. 

I really did enjoy Kirk’s internal monologue when setting the Enterprise to destroy itself. Kirk felt like the computer was sad.  He could hear the grief in its voice.  I really enjoy the description of the view from the surface of the planet Genesis.

“The Enterprise arced brilliantly from its orbit.  For an instant it was a comet, but the gravity of the new world caught it and held it and drew it in.  It would never again curve boldly close to the incandescent surface of a sun, never again depart the gentle harbor of Earth to sail into the unknown.  The Gravity of Genesis turned the dying ship from a comet to a falling star.  It spun downward, trailing sparks and cinders and glowing debris.  It touched the atmosphere and flared more brightly.” Pg. 254-5

In closing on the other good parts about the book is it did focus a little on what Sarek and Amanda had to go through.  From finding out their son had died, that they might have lost the katra, to maybe getting that back, to Spock might be coming back to life.  They experienced a parent’s worst nightmare only to have it reversed.   

Restored Spock

Should it be canon: I prefer to think of what we saw on screen as the canon version of events and the book is just a clever “what if?”.

Cover Art: The cover has Kirk flanked by McCoy and Sulu.  Kirk has a phaser drawn and all three look awesome.  Spock’s face hovers in the background.

Final Grade: Final Grade 3 of 5

 

THE RETURN OF ONE FRIEND WHILE LOSING ANOTHER

 

Film Title: The Search for Spock   

Air Date: 6/1/1984

Written by Harve Bennett

Directed by Leonard Nimoy

Cast: William Shatner as Rear Admiral James T. Kirk    DeForest Kelley as Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              James Doohan  as Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        George Takei  as Commander Hikaru Sulu              Nichelle Nichols as  Commander Nyota Uhura          Walter Koenig as Commander Pavel Chekov      Robin Curtis as Lieutenant Saavik     Leonard Nimoy as the Excelsior’ computer and as Captain Spock’s adult body   Carl Steven as Young zombie Spock         Vadia Potenza as early teenage zombie Spock             Stephen Manley as older teenage zombie Spock       Joe W. Davis as Young adult zombie Spock        Phil Morris as Lieutenant (junior grade) Foster         Grace Lee Whitney as Lieutenant Commander Janice Rand                 Mark Lenard as Ambassador Sarek              Phillip R. Allen as Captain J.T. Esteban       Robert Hooks as Fleet Admiral Harrison Morrow       James Sikking as Captain Lawrence H. Styles              Miguel Ferrer as Commander Miguel Darby       Scott McGinnis as Lieutenant (junior grade) Heisenberg          Christopher Lloyd as Commander Kruge          Stephen Liska  as Torg              John Larroquette as Maltz                David Cadiente as unnamed Klingon Sergeant            Bob K. Cummings as unnamed Klingon Gunner #1             Branscombe Richmond as unnamed Klingon Gunner #2             Cathie Shirriff as Valkris            Paul Sorensen as Captain Harry Price          Danny Rogers as Hans Markheim           Jeanne Mori as unnamed Helm officer      Mario Marcelino as unnamed Communications officer     Mario Marcelino as  unnamed Alien     Sharon Thomas Cain as unnamed Waitress       Katherine Blum as unnamed Vulcan Child     Judith Anderson as unnamed Vulcan High Priestess     Gary Faga as unnamed Prison Guard#1     Doug Shanklin as unnamed Prison Guard#2     Teresa E. Victor as Enterprise Computer       Judi M. Durand as space dock controller      Shirley Anthony as unnamed Vulcan Priest       David Armstrong as unnamed Vulcan Priest       Benjie Bancroft as unnamed Vulcan Priest             Jessica Biscardi as unnamed Vulcan Priest      

Ships and Space Stations: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, USS Grissom NCC-638, USS Excelsior NX-2000, Earth Spacedock, IKS B'rel

Planets: Earth, Genesis Planet, and Vulcan

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The adventure begins mere weeks after the previous one ended with the Enterprise limping home from its victorious battle with the “Superior Intellect.”  With Spock dead however, Admiral Kirk doesn’t feel very victorious.  With almost all the training crew reassigned, the Enterprise only has a skeleton crew.  Suddenly there is a security breach.  Someone has broken into the late Captain Spock’s quarters.  Kirk gets down there and finds McCoy during a rather impressive Spock imitation.  McCoy in Spock’s voice wants to know why he wasn’t returned to Vulcan then he passes out.  At this point Kirk is probably thinking, “gee I thought I took Spock’s death hard.”

Entering spacedock

They get to space dock which is far more impressive than the space dock in the last two movies.  As the Enterprise moves in, everyone at the station is horrified to see battle scars.  The bridge crew then sees Starfleet newest idea: the starship Excelsior.  She is big and beautiful, and Sulu is already in love.  (I wonder if that will lead to anything.)  Fleet Admiral Marrow comes down to tell them they have all down an amazing job.  However, Genesis is a very controversial topic now, so they are not going to be allowed to talk about it.  In better news, Scotty gets a new assignment aboard the Excelsior (doing the same thing that he has been doing for the Enterprise) and a promotion to the rank of Captain.  Here we have the Star Trek franchise’s very first on-screen promotion.  Scotty is honored but would rather stay aboard the Enterprise.  That’s when the Fleet Admiral gives some more bad news, the Enterprise is being retired as she is too damn old.  Kirk goes to protest, but the Fleet Admiral insists with some reason explaining that the Enterprise is now 20 years old.  At this point Kirk wants to yell, “those who can’t do simple math should be allowed to make any sort of decision, the Enterprise is 40 years old you moron.”  However, Kirk doesn’t for two reasons. The first is that it would be insulting insubordination and the second is if he hopes to change their mind, he is best not remind the brass that the ship is twice as old as they already think it is.

The future of Starfleet

  Around the Genesis planet, the USS Grissom is in orbit.  Aboard this science vessel is Dr. David Marcus and Lt. Saavik (who has matured quite a bit, it’s almost as if she was a completely different person) they are guiding this crew on this special journey.  Captain J.T. Esteban, who is commanding, is a very stickler for rules and slow to make decisions but Marcus and Saavik find a way to work around him.  As strange lifeforms readings appear the two of them talk the Captain into allowing two-person landing party to investigate. 

The two person landing party 

 Elsewhere a small merchant ship is waiting for something and onboard is a two-person crew and a female Klingon.  Suddenly a Klingon Bird-of-Prey decloaks above the merchant ship in all of its awesomeness.  The Klingon on board, named Valkris, sends the data her people have been waiting for.  Commander Kruge is happy to get it but disappointed that Valkris reveals that she has seen it.  For he is under orders to leave no one who has seen it alive.  He has ship destroy the merchant ship killing everyone board even that lady Klingon who we learn was his lover.   Later he goes over the Genesis data with those who are authorized.  We see the same tape played from The Wrath of Khan but instead it is Kirk not Carol Marcus giving the introduction.  (Which okay I get the studio doesn’t want to pay Bibi Besch any more residuals than are necessary and Dr. Carol Marcus isn’t supposed to be in this movie, but shouldn’t it be David whose explaining what Genesis is?  Granted considering David’s fate in this story that may have been why they had Shatner do it, but it still feels cheap.)  Kruge declares this to a doomsday weapon to which they have a natural right to defend themselves against.  For them the mission is now on.   

Admiral Kirk is having a get-together at his place when Ambassador Sarek arrives and demands a solo meeting the Admiral.  Kirk agrees and Sarek begins criticizing Kirk in ways that Kirk really doesn’t understand.  Sarek and Kirk mind meld so Sarek learns exactly what Kirk experienced at Spock’s death.  It turns out Vulcans have been able to transfer their essence—their soul as it were—to others upon death.  This is something that Vulcans gain by being touch telepaths.  They call this their katra, the transfer of all the know into another body who will host it long enough to return to Vulcan where it is to be interred in the Hall of Ancient Thought at Mount Seleya.  Sarek had thought Kirk had Spock’s katra and for reasons he didn’t understand was neglecting his duty.  He turns away disappointed that Spock’s katra, everything that he knew and was, would be lost forever.  At this point Kirk should have jumped and said “he is not fully gone for we still have Big Spock.  Big Spock!”  Rather than confuse the older Vulcan he just claimed that Spock “would have found away.”

Sarek looking for his son's soul

Going over security footage Kirk notices the physical contact between Spock and McCoy, and suddenly McCoy’s weird behavior makes a lot of sense.  They are instructed by Sarek to get both Spock’s body and McCoy to genesis to complete the procedure.  This is going to be hard because McCoy was already trying to get back to Genesis, he gets picked up by Federation security and in his confused state tries to give the man a Vulcan nerve pinch.

Kirk generally tries to explain everything to the Fleet Admiral and get permission to do what they need to do.  However, his commanding officer orders him not to go and expressly stay away from Genesis and not talk about it.  Of course, Kirk is going anyway he just wanted to give Starfleet the opportunity to do the right thing.    

On the Genesis planet, David and Saavik find Spock’s photon-torpedo coffin.  It’s surrounded by creatures that used to be microbes.  On the inside are Spock’s burial robes so his body has been separated from its coffin and is naked. They hear a cry, and they find a Vulcan child.  Spock’s body has regenerated and was reduced to infancy and is now a toddler.  They report this to Captain Slow Decision, who while slowly deciding what to do, has no idea what is coming next.  The Klingon Bird of Prey decloaks and the slow Captain can’t think to say “shields up” so the Klingon torpedo destroys the Grissom.  Understanding what has happened Saavik and David take the young Spock and go into hiding.

To Kirk the best ride to Genesis would be his favorite ride, and the crew pulls a Mission Impossible type of assignment where each actor has his own part to play in the breakout.  (Except McCoy who just needs to be rescued.  Kirk gets McCoy out of his cell; Sulu beat the guard who called him ‘tiny’ and blew up the security consul; Uhura running the transporter room sticks “Mr. Action” in the closet (in one of best Uhura scenes of all time) and gets them back onto their ship.  Now that they are on the Enterprise it is Scotty’s turn to contribute.  Not only does he have the ship running but he has hacked into the Starbase’s system to open the space doors, but it’s that last one that almost takes a little too long.   Captain Styles powers up his Excelsior to give chase.  However, that is where Scotty comes through once again.  As the Enterprise takes off the Excelsior stalls in its pursuit.  “Good morning, Captain” is Scotty’s message to his now former CO.

On the planet Spock is aging rapidly.  David confesses to Saavik that he had added proto mater to the Genesis matrix.  This substance is illegal and highly unstable, but David said it solved certain problems.  This is when Saavik explains the Pon’ Farr to David. Vulcans normally have their mating cycle once every seven years but due to his rapid again, Spock’s about to experience it every hour.  Fortunately, he has a nice lady Vulcan on the planet, and she is ready and willing to do the deed.  After all it is only logical.  And while Spock and Saavik are getting it on David is trying to protect them from Klingons.  He doesn’t do a good job as shortly after they are all captured. 

A very brave but not always smart bunch

The Enterprise arrives in orbit around Genesis planet, and as she does the Klingon ship goes into cloak mode.  They summon their commander back to the ship.  Kruge had been arguing with his prisoners about the merits of Genesis, while they see it as a failure Kruge still sees the potential of this Doomsday weapon.  The two commanders try to figure out what the other is all about.  Kirk guesses correctly about a cloaked ship, that it is both out there but needs to decloak in order to fire.  As Klingon ship goes into attack the Enterprise fires first with torpedoes sending their enemy flying.  If the Enterprise was in peak condition that would have been all she wrote for the Klingons.  But in her damaged state the Klingon ship was able to recover and return fire.  The legendary ship couldn’t even get her shields up as the Klingons landed a crippling blow.  Kirk tries to bluff his way out, but he is dealing with Kruge, the coolest Klingon to date, not Balok of the First Federation.  Kruge correctly guesses the Enterprise’s best days are behind her and demands Kirk’s surrender.  He points out he has hostages and will even let the Admiral talk to them. 

Saavik explains Spock’s condition as best she can.  David explains that he messed up and Genesis is a failure.  If this movie wasn’t called The Search for Spock, it could be called David Marcus, The Never-ending Screw Up.   David tells his father that Genesis is a failure, that he messed up, and then brilliantly adds “I don’t believe they are going to kill us for it.”  Kruge, of course, takes that as a challenge and orders one of their deaths.  It looks like the Klingon is going to kill resurrected Spock, but David won’t let him die again especially since it was his fault.  He goes to fight the Klingon, something his father has done several times.  However, he may be Admiral Kirk’s son, but his name isn’t Kirk, it’s Marcus and that is fitting because he is so much more a Marcus than a Kirk.  Unlike his father David is not one of the great fighters in the galaxy.  He has neither speed nor grace, his blows lack power.  The Klingon warrior quickly overpowers him and guts him like a fish.  Saavik has the horrid duty of announcing his death.  Kirk collapses raging against the Klingon for killing his son.  Kruge is unmoved and reminds him of the hostages that he still holds.  Kirk agrees to surrender but the Enterprise still has one last trick up her sleeve. 

Kirk asks for time to prepare the crew he doesn’t actually have and Kruge allows.  He sends nearly his entire crew as a boarding party; Klingon Bird of Preys are very small and only have a crew-complement of slightly over a dozen.  Kirk, with Scotty and Chekov, activate the ship’s self-destruct device.  They transport away just before the Klingons are transported onboard.  They search going all the way to the bridge.  The lead Klingon checks back with his Commander and tells Kruge that the ship appears abandoned.  With constitution-class starship normally having over 400 crew members Kruge can’t believe it.  The team leader states the computer is talking, Kruge hears it and realizes what it is but it is too late.  The Enterprise lights up in fire of its own creation destroying itself and anything aboard her which includes most of Kruge crew.  Kirk and crew watch as the Enterprise turns to dust in the atmosphere over planet Genesis.  Kirk shoots with a phaser the exact Klingon who killed his son.  He then manipulates Kruge to come down to the planet and to bring his crew up, save him and Spock.  At this point Kruge only has one crew member, however since he thought a small landing party could hold over 400 people, he clearly doesn’t doubt his warrior’s ability to guard five. 

The Death of the Enterprise

Kirk and Kruge face off.  We know Kruge is a warrior, but he is not facing David Marcus, Kirk’s late and soft son, he is facing one of greatest fighters this side of galaxy.  Kirk fights with speed and grace that will often leave his opponents spellbound.  And Kruge is more than spellbound, with some boot kicks to the face he falls to his death and ends up in a poll of lava just before the planet explodes.

Warrior to warrior

Kirk tricks the Klingon remaining to beam him and Spock’s reanimated body up to the ship.  They escape in the nick of time and head to Vulcan.   There they bring Spock’s body and McCoy to the Hall of Ancient Thought at Mount Seleya.  The Vulcan priests and priestesses manage to take Spock’s katra out of McCoy and back into the body it belongs.  Spock is out of it and clearly has a long way to go but he recognized his friends who came back to save him.  

A family reunited!

    

Additional thoughts: There are those who say the good Star Trek movies are the even numbered ones and the bad ones are the odd number films.  Those people are really stupid, and you shouldn’t listen to them about this subject or any other subject.  The Search for Spock gives the viewer everything you would want in a middle chapter story.  We start right where we had left off, followed by non-stop action, and finish ready for the next chapter.  The title is a bit of spoiler to paraphrase Leonard Nimoy, we called it “The Search for Spock” it would be rather odd if Kirk turned to the audience at the end and said, “sorry folks, we didn’t find him.”

Everyone seeing the damage

What ever happened to T’Pau? You remember her from the famous episode “Amok Time.”  The last time Kirk defied Starfleet to save Spock’s life.  She, by her own authority, was able to get the Enterprise’s orders retroactively changed so Kirk could keep his command.  Why don’t they go to her for help against Starfleet this time?  Heck, they could save themselves half a trip and she could just order the Grissom to bring Spock’s body back to Vulcan.  Is she dead or otherwise incapacitated.  I wonder more about her missing than I do about Big Spock.  Why didn’t Kirk bring him up again? 

Where was she this whole time?

In Lenord Nimoy’s follow up auto-biography I Am Spock, when discussing the Spock and Savvik scene dealing with Spock’s Pon’ Farr, Nimoy had a bet with one of writers.  Nimoy did not think anyone would laugh and then made a bet about it which Nimoy won.  Well, that may have been true in 1984, however ever since I first watched it, I always found it hilarious.  First, why is Spock going through this now where in his original life it didn’t hit him well into adulthood at which point he was a commander in Starfleet and first officer of the Enterprise?  Here since it started early it will now hit often with rapid aging which means Saavik and Spock really got down to it a lot.  What a lucky Spock!  Too bad remember any of it, or can he?  That was never really clear.  

Before I talk about the death of the Enterprise, I want to point out in Star Trek Which Way book I reviewed a little while ago, I, as a Starfleet ensign, lead a boarding party onto a Klingon ship.  When fighting on the bridge some Klingons were near the computer consul entered something in and retreated.  Going up to the consul I saw images flashing, now I don’t speak Klingonese but I can recognize symbols changing and could easily guess these were numbers counting down.  So, I took my phaser and blasted it preventing the self-destruct and allowing the capture of the Klingon ship.  For that I was promoted to lieutenant.  Now if you are wondering if I feel superior to the Klingon officer who didn’t understand what the talking computer was doing, I do feel superior.

 Now let’s talk about the Death of the Enterprise.  When this movie came out in 1984, Star Trek was eighteen years old.  It is hard to overstate the trauma of watching this beautiful ship die on the big screen to these Star Trek fans.  For those eighteen years the starship Enterprise was the ship of their dreams.  The amazing vehicle that traveled through space faster than light and took them to all their adventures both on the small screen, the big screen, live action, animated, and in literary form.  The ship was where their characters returned to at the end of all their adventures.  Once they were back on board, they were safe again.  Although there were times when the entire ship was in danger, she would always escape whatever peril they faced just in the nick of time with the chirping of the computer equipment on the bridge.  As Kirk, Scotty, and Chekov enter in the death codes what fan didn’t to hear Admiral Kirk’s voice say, “Code1-2-3-continuity, abort destruct order."  Just like he did the last time they considered scuttling the ship.  Thus, saving and the ship and finding another way to defeat their enemy that didn’t involve killing one of their friends.  However, it was not to be here in orbit on the Genesis planet.  The Enterprise would go out on her own terms at the hands of a lover rather than a stranger.  She was consumed by fire of her own creation destroying both herself and the Klingon crew that infiltrated her.  As what was left of her crew watched her remains burn up in the atmosphere, they were reminded that she was a beautiful lady, and they loved her.

Saying good-bye to their ship!

     Sadness aside, there was also something else about the destruction.  Although it may have been a stunning visual effect, it didn’t make a lot of sense.  You would think the ship blowing itself up would have its main explosion be its primary engine.  With the saucer burning up in the atmosphere after that.  What we see is the exact opposite, the place with personal quarters and research laboratories explodes and the engine star drive section is what falls into the atmosphere.

This has to be the damn coolest the landing party has ever looked! 

The Genesis planet is unstable that I can buy but they think they were a little too quick to come up with the reason and blame it on David?  David explained he used proto-mater in the Genesis formula to solve certain problems, and Saavik objects to this as it is widely considered unstable. Yet the earlier Genesis in the undergrown cave was fine.  Some may say it’s the scope, but I am bothered by something different.  When were explained Genesis, the plan was to test it out on some dead world or moon.  The mission of the Reliant in the previous film was to find such a planet for them to use.  It was never meant explode inside a damaged starship flouting around the middle of a nebula.  Such a major change of variables should be the first thing that is pointed out, yet no one ever does.  Instead of labeling Genesis a failure they should say it has never been properly tested.

In reading Nimoy’s I Am Spock we learn a great deal about what went to his decisions on the movies where he was director.   He stated that he was given a number of ship design models.  Of the bunch he chose the one that became the Excelsior because it looked the most like the Enterprise.  There was a clear evolution between the designs, Nimoy felt as if the two were designed by the same people.    

There was one small detail that I really liked.  Scotty was promoted to captain, yet on the Enterprise’s computer system he still identified as a commander.  This makes since considering the vastness of space there is no way for all the starships to be so interconnected.  (They probably weren’t thinking of that in 1984 as the world was not yet online.)  It was a nice little detail that they didn’t update the personal files on a decommissioning starship.

The Klingons attack

We must talk about Christohpher Lloyd and how he as Commander Kruge came to define the Klingons for the franchise going forward.  Yes, there have been impressive Klingons in the past such as Kor and Kang.  Here, however, is where the standard is set.  When the Klingons got the new/traditional/true look in The Motion Picture, the only thing we saw from them was they were getting their butts kicked to V’ger.  Here we get to see what these Klingons are all about.  A warrior species that thinks about honor, glory, and duty.  The first thing we see Kruge do is kill his wife along with the human smugglers because she saw something she wasn’t authorized; we also see that she has no problems with this and gladly goes to her death.  Kruge leads his own landing party and when he encounters a strange life form, he puts aside his advanced weapons and meets it head on.  It almost kills him before he kills it and tells his ship that they have encountered nothing important.  He dares to take on a starship that has ten times his fire power and actually win.  He chooses battle with his enemy and almost certain death because he won’t give quarter.  He was a great leader of Klingons; he does not tolerate repeated failure and will punish it with death.  The guy probably would have won if he didn’t have the misfortune of going against James T. Kirk.  

Kruge leading his men

According to Nimoy the original antagonists in this film were going to be the Romulans, but he changed it to the Klingons.  That is why they have a ship called “Bird of Prey” and can cloak; this is something Klingons couldn’t do up until that time.  Although the Klingons were mentioned as having the cloaking ability in the episode “The Time Trap.”

I still don’t understand why Kirk was tasked with retrieving Spock’s body. Also, would it have continued to age and regrow the radiation burns that killed him if he stayed on the planet too long?  I wonder if his ever-growing changing body has some sort of consequence for Saavik who had sex with him a lot.  

Did Kirk actually sacrifice in the way Sarek says he did at the end?  Did he give up his son and ship for Spock?  Because I think he would have lost those things anyway.  The Enterprise was set to be decommissioned by Starfleet, and the Klingons were already chasing after Genesis.  He wasn’t getting his ship back, and the Klingons might have killed David anyway considering he could neither fight nor shut his mouth for too long.  

 

FINAL GRADE 5 of 5

Weird Aliens and a Three-Way Showdown

 

Name: The Trellisane Confrontation

Author: David Dvorkin   

Publication Date: 2/1984

Publisher: Pocket Books (Star Trek #14)

Page Number: 190

Historian’s Note:  Sometime between “Turnabout Intruder” and “More Tribbles More Troubles”

Cast of Characters:  Captain James T. Kirk       Commander Spock              Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”       Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Nyota Uhura              Lieutenant Kinitz               Lieutenant Bill               Nurse Christine Chapel           Ensign Pavel Chekov              Governor Lerak Kepac                  Mr. Johnson             many unnamed crewmen     Fleet Commander Kaged               Captain Karox        several unnamed Klingon soldiers   Fleet Commander Tal            Hander Morl   unnamed Nacterns     unnamed Onctiliians      Veedron             Goldor          Goro               Matabele

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, Starbase 28, Karox's unnamed battleship, four unnamed Romulan ships, Matabele's unnamed ship, unnamed Sealon attack ship, unnamed Sealon invasion craft, unnamed Sealon shuttlecraft

Planets: Treflog and Trellisane

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The Enterprise is on a sensitive mission near the Romulan Neutral Zone.  They are picking up prisoners from Starbase 28 in orbit around Treflog.  These prisoners are a human named Hander Morl and his band of trained assassins.  Morl is part of a group called the Federation Expansionist Party, who believe it is the Federation’s destiny to conqueror and rule the entire universe.  They planned to refit one of their ships to look like a Starfleet vessel and use it to start a war. It is a good thing they were caught.

The ship receives a distress call from a planet called Trellisane, a planet on a world that is natural territory but one that has been looking to receive Federation membership.  Kirk decides to answer it before dropping off the prisoners because time may be of the essence when it comes to saving lives.  When they arrive, they are attacked by what appears to be a Klingon ship, they however make a short work of it. Upon further investigation, these weren’t Klingons at all, but their ships were only made to look that way.  That sounds familiar to something from earlier.  

They beam down only to find themselves in a conflict

The fake Klingon ship wasn’t connected to our newly captured terrorists but instead belongs to the Sealons.  Sealon is another planet in Trellisane’s own solar system that also has intelligent life.  Its main intelligent species is aquatic and violent.  They fought many wars amongst themselves before the people of Trellisane contacted them.  They decided to help their neighbors by upgrading their technology.  Now due to the prime directive the Federation would never do that and after their experience Trellisane would learn why.  The people of Sealon unified and decided to wage war on their former beneficiaries. They were able to do so with their alliance with the Klingons who Kirk now learns are sticking their noses in this solar system.  It was one of these attacks that prompted them to send out the distress call. 

The Enterprise is again attacked while Kirk, Spock, and McCoy are leading a landing party on the planet.  Sulu, in command on the bridge, easily defeats their opponent but the ship suffers some minor and unexpected damage.  This damage allows the prisoners in the brig to escape.  They are able to head to the bridge and commandeer the Enterprise.  They give an apology to Kirk as they take the ship, letting him know that while he might lose this command the coming war with the Romulans will require officers like him to command ships against the enemy.  Kirk, in brief state of shock, before brainstorming with Spock on how to proceed.  With Veedron, one of the leaders of Trellisane who was assigned to great them, not knowing how to help his planet recover from these attacks Dr. McCoy volunteers to organize relief. 

Desperate to return to the ship!

As the Starfleet officers help the citizens of Trellisane they learn about the planet’s class structure.  The leaders are called the gemot. Each gemot rules either a continent or the head of a government agency.  Veedron is the head gemot of the planet. However, there is also a slave class.  These people are called the yegemot.  These people are considered nothing but chattel with no rights whatsoever.  When one collapses the regular citizens look at Dr. McCoy oddly when he tries to treat them.  Kirk at one point tells the yegemot that things are going to be different if their world joins the Federation.  When McCoy is doing medical work on these enslaved people, he finds chips have been implanted in their heads.  He also finds chips placed in the gemots heads as well. 

Back on the Enterprise, Sulu and Chekov wake up from being stunned and begin to study their situation waiting for an opportunity to strike.  In the meantime, they cooperate and do their duty to make sure the ship doesn’t fly apart. Little do they know that Hander Morl is sending the ship on a suicide run. 

Trying to free themselves from their captors!

On Trellisane, Kirk and Spock leave McCoy to continue the relief and rescue efforts towards the places that were targeted in the attack.  With their disastrous contract with Sealons the locals have given up on space travel.  Kirk and Spock take a small boat to the landmass where the old ships could be found and hopefully get off this planet to track down the Enterprise.

After not getting any real contact from the bridge, Scotty forces his way up there.  In doing so he sees that the ship has been taken over by hostels.  However, Scotty doesn’t flinch he informs Morl that ship needs repairs and as a result is falling out of warp.  Morl assigns a guard for him and has him fix it.  But Morl wants the cheap quick repairs done so they can continue with their mission.

Kirk and Spock run into a Klingon named Karox who is aiding the Sealons against Trellisane.  Kirk lets Karox know that his ship has been stolen and tries to convince him that it is his best interest to help him get it back.  Spock points out that the Romulans won’t believe Mohl’s plan as they are more likely to capture the Enterprise rather than destroy it.  If they do that the Romulans will develop an interest in this solar system.  The Klingon agrees to take Kirk so they can capture the ship for the Klingon Empire instead.

Kirk works out a deal with the Klingons!

Turns out the Romulans are already on their way, which means to Mohl’s eternal disappointment he won’t be able to provoke a war because he can’t invade Romulan space.  He might get a Starfleet ship captured anyway, giving the Romulans a huge edge in future conflicts.  This would clearly derail his dreams of the Federation galactic conquest.  They are surrounded and are about to be boarded but Mohl does a rather cruel trick on the Romulans: moving the ship just as the Romulans are beaming over causing them to beam into empty space.  However, it is out of the frying pan and into the fire because the Enterprise now faces the Klingons. Kirk tricks the Klingons into allowing him to lead the boarding party.  When he beams over, he finds that the crew has retaken the ship.  This changes the legalities somewhat and now the Klingons can’t take the Enterprise without formal war.  Kirk contacts the Romulan Fleet Commander who turns out to be Tal from “The Enterprise Incident.” 

Surrounded

When McCoy’s collection of chips explodes, he realizes just how the gemot are controlling the yegemot.  McCoy confronts Veedron about this.  All along Veedron insisted that the yegemot’s weren’t “fully people” and were bread from lower animals.  McCoy as a medical scientist can see this is not true. Then Veedron shows him how much his people truly believe it.  Veedron brings up the meat they ate together as part of a ceremony, even though the people of Trellisane are vegetarians 90% of the time.  He takes McCoy to the local butcher shop, and it is something out of a horror movie, as McCoy is introduced to butchers who are clearly slicing up yegemot people.  McCoy sees numerous torsos hanging from the ceiling. 

The Sealons turn on the Klingons killing those who are on the planet.  Spock is able to use these events to negotiate a peace on the planet.  At the same time Kirk negotiates a peace with the Klingons and Romulans.  Everything ends well and the crew of the Enterprise goes along their way. 

Additional thoughts: The overall story has some good concepts, but the execution of these concepts leaves a lot to be desired. I’ll elaborate as I go on.

The Federation expansionists were an interesting bunch.  They clearly love the Federation a lot while simultaneously not understanding anything about the Federation.  These people would be much more at home in the Terran Empire of the Mirror Universe, I bet their counterparts are happy.  (Or miserable, if that is the case then maybe they should switch places.)  The group also reminds me a bit of American settlers that would live in the late 18^th and 19^th centuries would move to and live in territory that was outside the United States hoping that the nation would expand and absorb their new home territories.  I also found reading this story feels very odd in a post-911 world.  With their suicide mission to bring about their desired world, caring not for the people they were about to kill. It’s hard not to think of the terrorist attack while reading this.  

According to this book the Klingon Empire is larger than the Romulan Star Empire and the Federation is larger than both combined.  I suppose that makes since in a way, since the Federation is a diverse society of thousands of planets and species working in harmony together that they would have a larger home territory than either of their homogenous enemies. 

When they discover that the Trellisanians have a slave caste our three primary heroes are taking a back.  They inform Veedron that the Federation only permits free societies.  However, I remember that not being true.  In the episode, “The Cloud Minders” we meet a Federation member world that clearly had a caste system with one group clearly in a slave-like status.  It was Ardana and when confronted about their planet by Kirk the leader, Plasus, invokes a state-rights argument.  So, is this a new rule the Federation has come up with? 

"No slavery in the Federation!  Are you sure?" 

It was good to see Tal again, and good to see that he has advanced higher in the Romulans Star Empire.  Tal was always an interesting adversary.  I assume the “death” of his Commander was a “spiritual death” as we have seen her in other stories. 

Fleet Commander Tal

My main issue with this book is that things got resolved too quickly or didn’t matter at all.  Take McCoy’s trip to the cannibal butcher shop in a scene that seemed to come straight out of a horror movie leads to nothing.  Nothing.  McCoy is never seen even so much as talking about it with his shipmates. Kirk and Spock both quickly but together peace deals.  There seemed to be something major missing.  It’s almost either the author got bored with his own story or he quickly came up to a publishing deadline and had to submit what he had.  As I said earlier, there are a lot of good ideas, but the execution fails.  

Should it be canon: Yes, as I don’t see anything here that would interfere with it.

Cover Art: A strange ship in the background with Spock and an unknown woman in the front of it.  Next to the characters on the viewers’ left is a Sealon, I believe.

Final Grade: Final Grade 2 of 5