Monday, June 29, 2026

MURDER WHERE THERE SHOULD BE NONE II: THIS TIME THERE IS A LOT MORE KILLING

 


Name: Demons

Author: JM Dillard

Publication Date: 7/1986

Publisher: Pocket Books (Star Trek #30)

Page Number: 251

Historian’s Note: Some time after the events of the book Mindshadow

Cast of Characters:  Captain James T. Kirk       Commander Spock              Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”       Lieutenant Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Nyota Uhura            Dr. Joseph M'Benga             Lieutenant Ingrit Tomson                   Lieutenant Stryker             Lieutenant (junior grade) Mohamed al-Baslama                Nurse Christine Chapel          Ensign Pavel Chekov              Ensign Anitra Lanter             Ensign Lisa Nguyen   Ensign Sanghoon Cho       Ambassador Sarek             Amanda Grayson              T'Ylle            T'Sai        Silek             Soltar        Starnn       

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, USS Surak (Registration unknown)

Planets: Vulcan and Beekman's Planet

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The story begins with a murder.  A Vulcan scientist, named T’Ylle, is on an assignment to Beekman’s Planet researching the end of an ancient civilization that appears to have torn itself apart in madness.  The madness isn’t in the past however as her own research team comes down with it resulting in them murdering each other including her.

Sarek has a reunion with his brother, a researcher named Silek.  They haven’t seen each other in decades as Silek has been on an archaeological mission that has taken him away from Vulcan.  They have returned and Sarek is sorry to learn that his brother has recently been made a widower.  Silek reports that his father-in-law and mentor has been acting strangely even beyond the actions of a grieving father.  Sarek gets to meet this Vulcan named Starnn.  Upon meeting Sarek, Starnn gives him a gift one of the relics taken from the expedition.  Sarek refuses as it should be in a museum, but the two other Vulcans insist that he take it as they have so many of them.  It is reasoned that as an ambassador, Sarek can show the object to foreign dignitaries.  With that Sarek accepts the gift.

Sarek and Amanda

Sarek brings his brother home for a reunion with Amanda.  Silek has never met Spock but is amazed to learn that he is in Starfleet.  Amanda and Silek get caught up with information about each other’s family.  

On the Enterprise Lt. Tomson informs her second-in-command of his promotion, while a new young ensign in the Science department, who already has her PhD, defeats Mr. Spock in a chess match.  McCoy is quite taken with the beautiful young woman.  Her name is Anitra Lanter, and she can be a bit of a troublemaker.  As Captain Kirk finds out when she places a microphone in his shower and broadcasts his shower singing across the whole ship.

After being embarrassed in the shower

While this comic relief is going on the story also takes a serious turn as the officer who was happy to receive his promotion is found to have been murdered and not just killed but tortured to death.  As the crew of the Enterprise is dealing with this, on Vulcan Silek is concerned about his brother.  Sarek’s behavior is changing and the younger Vulcan feels that what happened with his expedition is happening here.

Mr. Spock discovers that it was Ensign Lanter’s responsibility for the prank played on Kirk and forces her to confess.  Kirk gives her a non-judicial punishment where she must tune up the ship’s engines. This is a task that to the unexperienced would take a number of days and she had to do it on her own time.  The Captain is somewhat amused when she inquiries about going on shore leave after she is done.  The Ensign, however, is really good at tuning up the engines and even Scotty is impressed with the results and hopes to have help out again someday.  As a result, she manages not to miss a bit of shore leave, to Kirk’s annoyance. 

Lanter being a pain in Kirk's side

  Kirk was sensitive at first to the idea of shore leave on Vulcan but so far everything seems okay.  Both Spock and McCoy seem to spend a lot of time with Ensign Lanter.  Later, Spock decides to check in on his parents.  At his childhood home Spock finds his uncle’s dead body, and he has been brutally murdered.  He locates his mother only to discover she is in a state hysteria. she tells Spock that something has taken control of his father and that before he died Silek wrote a letter to warn her.  

Spock mother is taking back to the ship.  It turns out their enemy is the closest thing to a demon in real life—hence the title of the book.  They are energy creatures that exit their containment boxes—the artifacts—by physical contact with a host.  Once they enter the body, they take control of the person’s mind and have access to all their memories and knowledge.  On top of that these aliens augment their host bodies strength and can make the body bend and twist in unnatural ways adding to the visual horror.  These aliens also are extreme sadists who enjoy torturing their victims to death. This is the reason for the murders. 

To make matters worse there is not one alien intelligence controlling their hosts but multiple, and this allows them to spread from host to host like a virus.  The only thing an infected individual needs to do to spread these tiny entities is make eye contact with an unaffected person.  In time this becomes widespread on Vulcan leading to multiple murders in places unaccustomed to any.  An officer on the Enterprise named Striker infects many crew members including Scotty who go on to infect many more. 

Crew falling under mind control

It is at this point we learn the truth about our new Ensign.  Lanter is a human being with a mutation that gives her telepathic powers.  In other words, she has the power to read minds sometimes even if she doesn’t want to.  She had been assigned to the Enterprise by Starfleet Command so Mr. Spock could help her control her powers.  This is why Spock has been spending so much time with her also intelligence became aware of possibility of the alien threat and realized her abilities would be an asset to fighting this threat.

With most of the ship under control of these demon aliens, Kirk, Spock, McCoy and Lanter lock themselves in auxiliary control.  They realize they must stop the Enterprise from traveling and infecting more planets and starships.  They plan to inflict some crippling damage to the ship that will take even the infected Scotty sometime to repair. Then they will escape by shuttle to head to Vulcan and use the research labs at the Science Academy to help find a way to destroy the “demons’ hold” on much of the population.  The whole plan starts to sour as Kirk is infected and appears to destroy the shuttle with the young Ensign on it to the horror of Dr. McCoy.  Infected Kirk gloats about the tortures he plans to put McCoy through.  It appears that Spock and McCoy are doomed but Lanter, who faked her death, gets them out of there.  All three escaped to Vulcan even though Spock really didn’t want to bring McCoy along.

Locked in Auxiliary Control

They land on Vulcan but not wanting to encounter anyone they decide to land in the desert and get head to the city on foot.  McCoy is injured and they stop at a Vulcan settlement run by Vulcans undergoing the practice of Kolinahr.  As a monastery they do not get many visitors, so they have been immune to the problem on most of Vulcan.  Spock alerts them to what is going on and asks them to take on no new students.  Spock and Lanter head out to try to solve the problem, and Spock orders McCoy to stay behind.  McCoy ignores the order and leaves and nearly gets killed again. 

Kolinahr Monastery
  

Back on the Enterprise, infected Kirk has been captured by Uhura and is then locked up alone.  This isolation cures Kirk of his infection.  Unfortunately, he soon loses Uhura to infected Sulu.  Kirk is able to lock up Tomson, and she gets better and the two of them capture the infected Sulu and Uhura.

On Vulcan, McCoy thinks he may have come up with a treatment that they could use on the infected.  Spock thinks his father would be a good guinea pig.  He goes to capture him but is severally injured in a battle with his infected father.  Lanter goes after Spock, but she gets infected as well.  The infected Sarek and Lanter capture McCoy, and they have him treat Spock’s injuries, all the while telling him of the tortures that they are going to put him and Spock though.  However, McCoy gets the jump on them when he knocks them both out with a phaser. 

It turns out the creatures thrive on spreading and feeding on the suffering of others, if an infected person is insolation for too long the entities will die.  The only exception to this is when they are in a type of suspended animation in their designer containers that we saw in the beginning of the story. McCoy mixes an anaesthetizing gas that will keep people out long enough for the evil creatures in them to die.  This works for both Sarek and Lanter.

The Enterprise enters orbit.  Kirk and some recovered crew members have gained control of the ship just as its engines were restored.  They take some fire from the Surak but manage to evade them.  Kirk gets in contact with Spock and McCoy and some explanations are given both ways.  Kirk volunteers the Enterprise to test McCoy’s gas, they transport containers of it up and put it to work. The Enterprise is normal in a few days. They then place it in the Vulcan atmosphere and peace is restored.  The remaining relicts that were untouched are placed under heavy guard.  

As the crew of the Enterprise and the population of Vulcan are recovering from what has happened, young Ensign Lanter decides Starfleet is not for her.  She has gotten what she needs to control her abilities from Mr. Spock and she feels that she is too much of a free spirit to stay in the rigid Starfleet hierarchy.  Lanter says her good-byes to Dr. McCoy and plants one more microphone in Kirk’s shower on the way out.  

Additional thoughts: This was a great Star Trek adventure. Star Trek doesn’t often do horror well just look at “Catspaw” and “Wolf in the Fold.”  This story is extremely exciting you don’t know what is going to happen next.  At any point any character can become infected, and you see no way out for the heroes.  I will add that the resolution of the story seemed to come easy.  That I think was necessary in terms of the story’s structure.  The demonic entities moved so fast that they would have overtaken the entire side of the galaxy in short time, therefore the resolution also must be able to move with great speed.   

I really enjoyed meeting Spock’s uncle Silek.  I was sad to see him die and I wish we could have seen more of him.  It was interesting in the beginning to see Sarek interacting with his brother as a peer as opposed to most of the time, he is presented as a sage giving advice.  In the book Silek is said to have a strong resemblance to Spock.  I can relate to that as I look more like my father’s youngest brother than I do him.  My favorite part is when we learn that Silek in choosing not to go into the family business of the diplomatic corps, his father stopped speaking with him and Sarek had to defy his father in order to maintain a relationship with his brother.  Since he has been on his science mission for over thirty years, he missed Spock’s birth and upbringing.  When he hears that Spock is a Starfleet officer, he lets Amanda know how impressed he is that his brother didn’t follow their father’s example and shun him.  Amanda doesn’t have the heart to tell him that he did.  Maybe Silek would still be impressed that Sarek at least got over it and returned normal relations.  We will never know.

In the book, “The Vulcan Academy Murders,” it mentioned that murder was unheard of in a thousand years on Vulcan. I titled that review “Murder Where There Should Be None.” This story puts that earlier one to shame for there wasn’t just a plan few murders but wholesale slaughter of thousands. Enough to try even cold Vulcan logic. 

I really didn’t like Lt. Tomson confrontation with Lt. Stryker.  Where she tells him that he killed her would-be-boyfriend Lt. Mohamed al-Baslama.  I really prefer Spock’s attitude when someone pointed out that his father killed his uncle he strongly responded with “My father has killed no one.” No one can be blamed for what these things did, and Tomson should be ashamed of herself. 

Ensign Lanter has been referenced by others as being a clear example of a “Mary Sue.” I disagree with that. While she certainly starts out that way I think it’s an intentional red herring.  Sues usually have a couple of traits that she is missing.  For one, Sues’ abilities are typically unexplained, however we do get an explanation: her telepathic powers.  It’s easy to repair engines when you can pull the information straight out of Scotty’s brain.  Also, she doesn’t die.  That is something that a Mary Sue is bound to do.    

When Spock and his company find themselves with the practitioners of Kloniare it makes me wonder if this is where Spock gets the idea to attempt it himself in “The Motion Picture.”  When McCoy is attacked by the le-matya, Spock makes reference to the loss of I-Chaya in the episode “Yesteryear.”

tragic encounter for young Spock

Lastly, why can’t the young Ensign Lanter leave poor Captain Kirk alone.  Do we really want to hear his shower singing all over the ship.  Does she really like Rocketman that much?

Should it be canon: I have no problem with this story being part of the official Star Trek canon as it does not conflict with anything and it’s a great story

Cover Art: The cover has Ensign Latner in civilian dress holding one of the containers that held these Demon entities. One her right is Dr. McCoy and on her left if Mr. Spock.  The cover is a lie, however, as both Spock and McCoy are dressed in their Starfleet monster maroon movie uniforms.  The story actually takes place in the last year of the five-year mission. 

Final Grade: Final Grade 5 of 5

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