Wednesday, June 5, 2024

The Alternative Factor-type book

 


Name: Triangle

Authors: Sondra Marshak and Myrna Culbreath

Publication Date: 3/1983

Publisher: Pocket Books (Star Trek #9)

Page Number: 188

Historian’s Note:  Sometime between The Motion Picture and The Wrath of Khan

Cast of Characters:  Rear Admiral/ Acting Captain James T. Kirk       Commander Spock              Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”       Lieutenant  Commander Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Commander Nyota Uhura              Lieutenant Pavel Chekov Lieutenant Dobius           Dr. Joseph M'Benga        Dr. Christine Chapel                The unnamed Starfleet Chief of Staff                        Sola Thane       Ambassador Gailbraith       Soljenov      Viana        Argunov         Z'Ehlah        Soljenov

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701

Planets: Cephalus IV

My Spoiler filled summary and review: A collective consciousness called the Totality is assimilating entire worlds into itself.  This thing originated on the planet Zaran, where the native population has been subjugated.  The Totality is descended from a group of Humans who fled Earth during the atomic wars and now form a collective unconscious. Ironically the Federation has the New Human Movement on Earth that is sort of doing the same thing on a much smaller scale.  That group’s “leader,” Ambassador Gailbraith, wants a chance to reason with this new adversary.  He argues since his Oneness is comprises of more highly evolved beings, they stand a better chance at facing it.  At his request the USS Enterprise, with her famous captain, is assigned the task of bringing him there.   

Prime target for the New Humans!
 

                Gailbraith’s motive in requesting the Enterprise is that he feels if he can assimilate Kirk into the Oneness that would be a great moral victory that would aid in the Oneness’s ultimate triumph.  Kirk isn’t too keen on the idea, and bumps heads with the Ambassador.  Gailbraith didn’t come alone but he brought many of his Oneness to assist.  To Kirk’s horror they began to go around assimilating members of his crew. With Gailbraith insisting his people are just exercising their right to proselytize, Kirk confines them to one section of the ship.  This had limited effectiveness although Gailbraith’s disobedience allows him to save Kirk from drowning in the ship’s pool. 

The Enterprise is redirected to pick up half-Zaran Federation Free Agent Sola Thane.  Thane was a Starfleet officer who was slated to command a starship when she resigned her commission to try and free her people from the Totality.  The fact that she gave up her opportunity to command a starship is absolutely puzzling to Kirk who himself regards starship command as his life’s work.  His instructions are to put his ship and crew at her disposal, which actually puts her in command of the mission, although this amounts to any plot point or relevance in the story. When they pick Agent Thane up, she and Kirk are immediately drawn to each other.  She also is drawn to someone else.  It is here we learn the episode “Amok Time” was exactly seven years ago.  This means Spock is getting into the mating cycle again and finds Thane an alluring match.

Spock maybe going through pon farr again 

We now randomly meet Soljenov the “leader” of the Totality. It becomes clear that the whole mission has been set in motion by Gailbraith and Soljenov.  Each is hoping that Thane will bond with someone, and this will allow them to use her advanced psionic powers to lock that person in their collectives and continue to universal domination.  Thane’s people do a “mate-hunt” where the female tracts down the male and bonds with them.

Kirk and Spock are both abducted to the surface of a nearby planet, forcing Thane to follow them in a "mate-hunt" as described above. Here we learn that Spock is willing to yield Thane to Kirk because he feels guilty for forcing Kirk to give up on Edith Keeler in “The City on the Edge of Forever.”  (So much for the power of pon farr.) Back on the ship McCoy tries to form an alliance with Gailbraith that story wise leads to nothing. The three of them put the mating conversation to the side and break into Totality's citadel. Thane is able to use her knowledge of her culture to convince one of the Zarans to trigger the self-destruct.

Kirk, Spock, and a lady!

Gailbraith and Soljenov both compete for the trio to join their group, with Thane encouraged to bond with either Kirk or Spock to help them escape the destruction. However, Zaran will not be destroyed.  Instead, the Totality and the Oneness both agree not to go on a universal conquest and to only accept new members voluntarily.  All Enterprise crew members taken by either group are released.  Thane leaves with Soljenov to try and re-direct the Totality.  The Enterprise heads home.

Additional thoughts: I really like that this story takes place during that unseen 2nd five-year mission between the first two films.  It is such a space of time that is rich with possibilities. I thought the previous book I read, Black Fire, would have worked much better as a story if it was placed during this time. 

The collective consciousness reminded me of the Body of Landru from “The Return of the Archons.” “Are you not of the body? Blessed is the body and all of its parts.”  I have to give the authors some credit.  When I read about the new human movement in the novel adaptation of The Motion Picture, I thought it was just one Gene Roddenberry’s silly ideas that never would amount to anything:  like Starfleet officers having data chips in their head that lets Kirk see the opening sequence of V’ger destroying the Klingon ships.  However, the authors deserve credit for taking this small thought bubble of Kirk’s and making a story out of it. A big fish vs. little fish fight with the New Human Movement’s Oneness against the Totality.  If only the story were better.  Unfortunately, this story has a lot of issues.

Kirk falls a little too hard for Thane, this is a repeat flaw also seen in the episode “Requiem for Methuselah.” There are also a number of story points that are brought up but never acted upon, such as Thane getting overall control of the Enterprise and Spock potentially going through pon farr again. The worst part is this book is often difficult to follow and understand.  Major story moments come out of nowhere like Soljenov showing up.  The episode reminds me so much of “The Alternative Factor.”  A lot of neat story ideas and great concepts that just fail in the overall presentation and execution.

We have been here before!

Should it be canon: I am indifferent to the idea of this book being made canon.  I guess that means no.  

Cover Art: The Enterprise is flying in front of a nebula.  Kirk and Spock’s faces are at the bottom of the page with Kirk on the viewer’s right and Spock on the viewer’s left.  The cover is bit of a lie as the Enterprise shown is clearly pre-movie refit, and the story occurs in between the first two films.

Final Grade: Final Grade 2 of 5

 

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