Wednesday, April 15, 2020

WHEN IT COMES TO CLASSIC STAR TREK PRODUCTION ORDER IS THE BEST WAY TO GO!!!


                 One of the interesting facts about Star Trek is when it first aired over fifty years ago they didn’t broadcast the episodes in order.  After producing a pilot that the studio rejected and then producing another that was accepted, the cast and production team got to work and started creating episodes.  Once they had a good number of episodes completed it became time to go on the air and it was at that point that an interesting decision was made. 

                Instead of starting the series with the accepted pilot and moving on in order from there, the producers in charge of the show felt that in order to capture the audience and secure higher ratings they should start with what they felt were their stronger episodes.  The team wanted to use the fact that they had several quality episodes to sift through that material in order to find what would be the best choice to hook the audience with.

                Given that this new series was written in an episodic format so all the adventures that the crew of the Enterprise went on were self-contained it did not matter what order the audience watched them in.  Why the same episode that won over studio executives wasn’t deemed worthy enough for the general TV audience I will never understand.  Given the success that Star Trek had going on six decades now I can’t say they were in the wrong nor would I wish that it have happened any other way.  Nevertheless I am still going to argue that when watching in production order the viewing experience goes up tremendously. 

                When I was growing up The Next Generation was in its heyday our local network would air it “Five Nights a Week” so I had plenty opportunities to see that series.  As much as I enjoyed TNG I always preferred The Original Series.  There was something about a younger captain, smaller ship, back and forth bickering between Spock and McCoy, and the cowboy nature of it all that excited me more.   Yet it was rarely on.  I enjoyed the movies but only got to catch the occasional original series episode that was until a little thing called Columbia House. 

                Through Columbia House I was able to order the entire classic Star Trek series.  Every month they would send me a VHS tape with two episodes on it and every month I would send them a check for $24.95!  Yes it is now scary to think what I paid for it, back then we thought it was a good deal.  Columbia House in sending the tapes did so in a completely random fashion.  The first tape I got had The Menagerie Parts 1 and 2 on it.  There was no logic to it sometimes I would get a season 1 episode with a season 3 and the season 3 was the one on the tape first.  It was Columbia House order, boldly going where no VHS provider had gone before.
I still have my original Columbia House Collection, the boxes do look nice.

                Fortunately I had another tool to help me sort this mess out, one that I bought with paper route money at the local Boarders.  It was The Star Trek Compendium by Allan Asherman, the revised 1993 edition.  This book contained a good deal of information about how the series was developed and it listed all the episodes from the Original Series, the Animated Series, and the six movies.  Since so much of the book was about how the show was made all the episode summaries were properly listed in production order.  So as each of my VHS tapes came in I used the book to check off which episodes I had and when I had the complete collection it became my guide to watching the series whenever I wanted to go through it all.
My guide to Star Trek when I was in Middle School

                So I suppose I am a bit biased for feeling that production order is the best however I think I can make a good case for it.  As you watch in production order you can see more clearly how the series developed by the writers.  Small technical terms change as “general quarters” becomes “red alert” and “screens” turn into “shields” in production order once these terms change they change.  If you watch by air date the terms will just seem to jump all over the place.    

                Although I do believe production order is superior there is one problem that I will openly acknowledge it doesn’t solve.  In number of polls that I have seen on Facebook and other online platforms, in deciding which series had the best series opening episode The Original Series often comes in last.  The reason for this is found in the comment sections in one of the rare cases where you can find consensus on the Internet.   That reason given is The Original Series’ opening episode isn’t a traditional first episode where all the characters are introduced and premise to the series is explained.  The Man Trap” which debuted on September 8, 1966 was just a random episode the sixth one produced.  There is nothing in this episode to tell you this is the beginning of anything.  If you watched it randomly that night you might not have realized its significance. 

As I stated production order doesn’t solve this problem.  Both the pilots “Where No Man Has Gone Before” and its predecessor the rejected “The Cage” also fail to introduce people or define the series.  In fact in some ways they are worse because they even openly talk about past adventures.  One can easily watch them and assume they are in the middle of something not the beginning.     
  
MINOR DETAILS

        Star Trek, like anything created by humans, isn’t perfect.  It makes errors here and there.  One of the fun things about being a fan is finding a way to correct and explain the errors in a constructive way.  The show introduces a new officer as a lieutenant but wearing an ensign’s uniform.  Simple explanation is the officer was just promoted and hasn’t gotten their rank insignia yet.  Lt. Sulu’s stand-in wearing the wrong color shirt, again the new helmsman transferred over from another department.  You can play this game with either viewing order but production order makes this easier and the fan-made explanation stronger.

The Doctors

        The first case up is Dr. Mark Piper from the episode “Where No Man Has Gone Before.” During the episode he is introduced as one the department heads, or in other words he is the chief medical officer.  This is odd when watching it in broadcast order because “The Man Trap” was all about Dr. McCoy.   Then after this adventure is over Dr. McCoy is right back to save the ship in “The Naked Time. “  So is this man the Katherine Pulaski of The Original Series?  Instead of staying on for a season he takes over only one episode when McCoy wants to quit only leaving when McCoy wants his job back the next day?  He is older than McCoy so it is unlikely he was an assistant filling in.

Dr. Piper
Dr. McCoy
        Production order makes this switch a lot easier.   Since “Where No Man” comes before all other episodes, unless you include “The Cage,” Dr. Piper is simply Dr. McCoy’s predecessor.   After Gary Mitchell became a near god, went mad, and killed some of his crewmates, the old Doctor decided that he had enough.  Dr. Piper then retires to greener pastures or transfers to some space station where people don’t turn into mad deities after traveling to the edge of the galaxy.  With Piper leaving McCoy steps into replace him.

        I like to think that Dr. McCoy was there all along, serving as Assistant Chief Medical Officer under Dr. Piper, who is then tasked with replacing the departing physician after the Mitchell incident.  If not I like to think he and Kirk had some sort of prior history seeing how close they are during the series.  Either way production order makes this detail easy to manage.   

Lt. Uhura’s Changing Uniforms

        If you watch the show by broadcast order one of things you are bound to notice is that for some strange reason Lt Uhura randomly changes uniform in a couple of episodes.  Instead of her classic red uniform miniskirt she is instead sporting a yellow uniform.  So what was up with that?  Was she twice the victim of a 23rd century dryer eating her famous red?
Lt. Uhura in her uncommon gold
             
The real world reason is that the actress Nichelle Nicholas started in the yellow and requested to the producers that she be allowed to change to the red.  It made sense for her to be in gold as she is a bridge officer alongside the captain, helmsman, and navigator.  When she requested the change it was early in the series and nothing had been strongly established yet.   If you watch it in production order her change from yellow to red happens once and then is consistent throughout the rest of the series.
Lt. Uhura in her more sexy red. 
 Production order also allows for an easier in-continuity explanation for Uhura’s change in attire.  We often see the bridge officers acting with other departments.  It’s not unusual for helmsman or navigator calling down to the phaser rooms or engineering.    We see Uhura often contacting other departments on ship as well.  In addition to that she also has some engineering skills.  When communication is suffering technical difficulties we see her trying to fix it herself.  In the episode “This Side of Paradise” infected with the Omicron Ceti III plant she sabotages the communications system to the point Kirk can’t fix it.  In Star Trek V: The Final Frontier she is the only member of the main cast up helping Scotty getting the Enterprise-A mission ready.  It could be that as bridge officers communication officers wore gold but given their close ties to engineering departments Starfleet made the decision to put them in red.  This is why Uhura changed uniforms without having changed jobs.  

  Mr. Spock’s Changing Uniforms
From "The Cage"

        Similar to the Lieutenant, Mr. Spock’s uniforms have changed as well.  When watching by broadcast order for some reason Spock goes from his classic blue to yellow and then back to blue.  Now you might point out that the same thing happens in production order when you include “The Cage.”  However with production order it still makes more sense.  In “The Cage” Spock was just the science officer hence why he wore blue.  When Captain Kirk assumed command Spock was now the first officer as well so he wore command gold.  Then after the events of “Where No Man,” Starfleet changed regulation and decided that any officer in charge of particular department must wear the uniform of the department regardless of where they appear in the command structure of the ship.   
Spock in gold

        I just imagine this exchange between Mr. Spock and Captain Kirk, right before the events in “Where No Man”.

CAPTAIN KIRK: “Mr. Spock any word on our new uniform orders for the senior staff after the laundry disaster?”

MR. SPOCK: “Yes Captain we should have the new uniforms at the end of the month and even better news the laundry and dryer situation has been fixed.”

CAPTAIN KIRK: “Well that is good having just got my command six months ago it is pretty embarrassing to be walking around wearing a commander’s stripes again.”

MR. SPOCK: “Having spoken to Mr. Scott and Mr. Mitchell I can confirm that all the senior staff feels just as ridiculous in lieutenant stripes.”

CAPTAIN KIRK: “Hard to imagine a more bizarre laundry disaster in Starfleet, it is certainly the first time something like this has happened.”

MR. SPOCK: “It is not the first.  The senior staff of the Enterprise under the command of your predecessor had a similar disaster where all senior officers including the captain were stuck with lieutenant stripes.  At the time I was a lieutenant so I was unaffected.”

CAPTAIN KIRK: “Captain Pike stuck in lieutenant stripes that had to have been a sight.”

MR. SPOCK: “On the subject of uniforms it appears I was going to have to get a new one anyway.”

CAPTAIN KIRK: “Oh?”

MR. SPOCK: “New Starfleet regulation states that department heads must have the same uniform as their department, regardless of role in the starship’s chain of command.  So I am going back to blue.”

CAPTAIN KIRK: “Hmm… That reminds me of something Mr. Spock.  With all this talk of rank insignia I just remembered to tell you, your promotion from lieutenant commander to commander has been approved.”

MR. SPOCK: “Thank you sir.  When does that become official?"

CAPTAIN KIRK: “Season 2.”

MR. SPOCK: “Season 2?”

CAPTAIN KIRK: “It’s an old Earth expression.  However given your new uniform is going to be more reflective of the department I would like to do something to help you stand out as first officer for the good of the ship.  I think I am going to authorize you to frock with full commander’s stripes for all of season 1.”

MR. SPOCK: “Indeed, thank you sir.  I will frock in commander stripes for all of season 1.”
Classic Spock 

Lt. Sulu’s changing job

      Mr. Sulu also has a change in uniform but unlike some of his shipmates it’s because he actually changes jobs.   However if you are watching by broadcast order he starts out as the helmsman before leaving that role to become the ship’s full time botanist, and then decides very quickly that was a mistake to become the helmsman again.  While certainly possible I feel production order offers a much better story for Mr. Sulu.   
Sulu in blue

I imagine Sulu won a position at Starfleet Academy for his talents in science.  While at the Academy he earned his pilot’s license and became a certified helmsman, as all officers who may have to serve on the bridge must.  As his career preceded his interest in the helm operations and command in general increased.  Upon the death of Lt. Lee Kelso in “Where No Man” Sulu uses that opening for an opportunity to transfer positions.   From then on Sulu rises to become one the recognized best helmsman in the fleet, while also continuing to maintain a botany collection and still going on away missions for science surveys from time to time.   His new command track career leads him to the captain’s chair on the Excelsior.     
On the command track as an officer of the line.

MAJOR DETAILS

Episodes of Star Trek are independent of one another.  Issues raised in an episode are resolved by the end of that episode.  Details from one episode to the next rarely spill over, with some small exceptions like when the Corbomite Maneuver being used again in “The Deadly Years” for example.  However I would argue that an episode’s placement can have a positive or sometimes negative effect on an episode.  In my view production order adds value to episode plots with details that are somewhat lacking in broadcast order.       

                The Squire of Gothos

                A great example of the strength of production order is the placement of “The Squire of Gothos.”  To be fair there is nothing really wrong about where it is placed in broadcast order where it follows “The Galileo Seven.”  However one of the episodes main events is much stronger when it is placed in production order right after “Shore Leave.”  

The reason is in “Squire” Kirk logically, but wrongly, assumes Trelane's power is artificial in nature and he uses a machine to gain his advantage over the Enterprise crew.   This leads Kirk to destroy that machine in hopes of stopping the Trelane from harming his crew.  After the machine is destroyed we learn Trelane is powerful in fact. 
Kirk miscalculates

If Kirk’s most immediate adventure was “Shore Leave” than Kirk had just been on a planet where dreams became reality.  The source of power in that episode turns out to be advanced alien technology that the crew accidentally activated when they beamed down to the planet.  It makes sense drawing on his most immediate experience Kirk would think a similar type of technology would be applied.  Again production order isn’t necessary here it just makes it better.  
Here is why

Lt. Bailey’s predicament

                The episode “The Corbomite Maneuver” features the Enterprise squaring off against a far superior power, where the ship and crew’s survival is dependent on Captain Kirk’s ability to bluff his way out of a dilemma.  The subplot of the story however is the plight of the Enterprise’s new navigator Lt. Bailey. 
Lt. Bailey lost among his peers

                Bailey is under a great deal of pressure.   His performance at his position in this episode is underwhelming he freezes and fails to act when ordered, and he tries to get ahead and acts on things without orders causing him to figuratively step on the Captain’s toes.  With every screw up heaps another layer of pressure on to the poor navigator. 

                The episode stands on its own and it was the tenth to air immediately following “Dagger of the Mind.”   However the episode is a lot stronger if viewed in production order.  It was actually the first one made after the second pilot.  When you watch it right after “Where No Man” Lt. Bailey’s struggle takes on added significance.  For one since both the helmsman and navigator were killed in that episode it means both Bailey and Sulu are new at their jobs.  Yet where Bailey is struggling Sulu is thriving.  This shows that 1) Captain Kirk is capable of making good personnel decisions, 2) Lt. Sulu’s talents at adapting to his new job, and 3) Bailey has a direct peer comparison which highlights his own mistakes and must add to his pressure to perform.  

                Following “Where No Man” also reminds the audience that Bailey is the direct successor to Gary Mitchell, a competent officer and personal friend of the Captain.  To paraphrase Coach Bill Belichick, Captain Kirk is used to getting a lot of value out of that position.  This gives Bailey added pressure that Sulu doesn’t have to worry about.  When Bailey senses the Captain looking at him he knows that Kirk feels disappointment in the loss and greater than normal standards for the position.  This becomes another layer of pressure for the young man to deal with.        
The man Bailey must replace

                Gary Mitchell and Charlie X

                If you watch in broadcast order after the crew of the Enterprise battles the salt vampire the next two episodes both deal with the concept of humans who are granted the power of gods.  The boy-god Charlie Evans in “Charlie X” and the aforementioned Gary Mitchell the man-god of “Where No Man Has Gone Before.”  Not only it is awkward to be dealing with the exact same situation in back to back episodes but it also creates some glaring plot holes.  For one the crew spends a good deal of time in “Where No Man” debating about what it means for any human to have this level of power.  Is it a good thing/bad thing?  They don’t know.  Yet if our previous adventure was “Charlie X” then that should be a moot point since they have seen such power demonstrated in front of them.  They only argument should be if Mitchell’s personality can withstand the power, not about the power’s nature.   Also there is no mention of the previous adventure despite the fact that it had just happened to them about a week or so ago.   

                Now if you watch this in production order both episodes are stronger as a result.  The tragedy of Gary Mitchell happens first so that is why Charlie Evans is never mentioned.   Also “Charlie X” is the eighth episode which is six after “Where No Man,” this allows for enough time to have passed for it to seem natural that Mitchell isn’t mentioned by name as he is a painful memory.   Since the Mitchell incident happened it reinforces Kirk’s resolve once the extent of Charlie’s power is realized.  When he erases “Sam” out of existence Kirk immediately moves from Charlie-needs-our-help mode to Charlie-is-a-threat mode.  His experience from before means Kirk will no longer hesitate.  Now to be fair Kirk wasn’t friends with Charlie and Mitchell didn’t start by wiping people out of existence, but my point is this while “Charlie X” stands on its own and doesn’t need “Where No Man” in the background having the prior episode there makes plot stronger. 
Kirk ready to slug Charlie

                Then there is of course the character of Gary Mitchell and his friendship with Captain Kirk.  “Where No Man Has Gone Before” was the first time William Shatner played Captain Kirk, it was the first time the character was fleshed out not just by Shatner but a writer and director as well.  When Mitchell is first exposed to the power and is recovering in sick bay he talks for a while with the Captain about how much the two of them had gone through and it is clear these men have deep emotional connection. In my review of the episode I wrote this:  
The friendship between Kirk and Mitchell for the two men helped cancel each other’s weaknesses.   Kirk taught Mitchell to be a great Starfleet officer and to fly up the ranks of Starfleet.  Mitchell helped turn Kirk from a ‘stack of books with legs’ to a social charmer and ladies’ man.  Traits that are traditionally associated with Captain Kirk. 
                This relationship is only believable as Kirk’s first appearance when you watch it third Mitchell comes off as a TV troupe.  The troupe of a character who is introduced and said to be “so important” to the main character’s past despite the fact we the viewers have never heard of this person before.  The character is then killed to add tragedy or spin off other stories for the main character.  A good example is Bad Brain Johnson from Lois and Clark: The New Adventures of Superman of the 1990s in an episode that guest stars Star Trek’s own Johnathan Frakes.  That type of character wasn’t what Gary Mitchell was and production order restores his dignity.
A character treated far better in production order

                It also sets a good starting point for Kirk and Spock.  In “Where No Man” the two of them hardly know each other.  They are playing chess together at the very beginning but it is apparent from their dialogue that these are two men who are getting to know one another.  When it comes time to make a stand against Mitchell, Kirk directly asks Spock if he even feels.  That is something over time Kirk doesn’t needs to ask instead he just occasionally reminds.  As the series goes on the relationship grows close enough that Edith Keeler notices in “The City on The Edge of Forever” that Spock’s place is by his Captain’s side.    

NOT FOR THE REST OF THE FRANCHISE
                I want to be clear that production order is only something I recommend for the Original Series and perhaps the Animated Series.  It doesn’t work with other branches of the franchise.  If you tried to watch The Next Generation in production order you would see Tasha Yar running around alive after dying and “Unification Part 2” before “Unification Part 1.”  The other series always knew where they wanted their episodes to be.

FINAL CONCLUSION

                At the end of the day you can watch Star Trek in any order that you like.  The reality is most of us started somewhere in the middle.  Many fans began by randomly seeing “The Best of Both Worlds” at the start of season 4 of TNG (most stations would usually re-air Part 1 right before to hype up the new part) and say “I need watch more of this.”  From that point the new fans would watch new episodes as they came out while randomly catching up on old ones.  It is up to each of us how we want to piece it together.  However if you are going to go on an original series marathon I hope I convinced you that production order is the way to go.  Most streaming services put everything in broadcast order I hope that they could be convinced to give fans some options.    


For those of you who are steaming and would like a list of production order:
My season 1 list (Contains links to all my reviews)
My season 2 list (Contains links to all my reviews)
My season 3 list (Contains links to all my reviews)


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Monday, April 6, 2020

DON’T TRUST ANY CREATURE THAT DOESN’T KEEP ITS CELLS IN ONE PLACE



Episode Title:  Operation -- Annihilate!

Air Date: 4/13/1967

Written by Steven W. Carabatsos

Directed by Herschel Daugherty  

Cast: William Shatner as Captain James T. Kirk and the corpse of George Samuel Kirk, Jr.     Leonard Nimoy as Lieutenant Commander Spock             DeForest Kelley as Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              James Doohan  as Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        George Takei  as Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Nichelle Nichols as Lieutenant Nyota Uhura          Majel Barrett as Nurse Christine Chapel            Eddie Paskey as Lieutenant Leslie                 Bill Blackburn as Lieutenant Hadley  Ron Veto as  Crewman Harrison        Frank Da Vinci as unnamed Guard           Maurishka  as Yeoman Ellen Zahra                     Jeannie Malone as unnamed Yeoman                     Joan Swift as Aurelan Kirk               Craig Huxley as Peter Kirk            Fred Carson as First Denevan  Jerry Catron as Second Denevan    David Armstrong  as Kartan

Ships: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, unnamed Denevan ship

Planets:  Deneva

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The Enterprise is on an important assignment.  Some archaeological research has indicated a disturbing pattern.  Numerous planets one right after the other going back two centuries shows their respective civilizations all collapsing due to mass hysteria.  Going in order the tragic cases follow a straight line and next on the line is the Federation colony of Deneva.  The last contact with Deneva was over a year ago.

The colony of Deneva is known for producing materials for the engineering needs of various Federation planets.  Scotty himself made the transport runs earlier in his career.  The Enterprise is continuing to try to contact the colony but they keep getting no response.  Since all the official channels seem unresponsive Captain Kirk orders Lt. Uhura to try a private frequency.   As she begins Dr. McCoy confronts Captain Kirk and asks if this was the colony that the Captain’s brother lives with his family.

Lt. Uhura gets the channel on the private frequency raised and Captain Kirk is able to speak very briefly with his sister-in-law, Aurelan.  She doesn’t make a lot of sense and it’s unclear if she realizes it’s him that she’s talking to but she seems absolutely horrified.  They lose contact and according to Lt. Uhura it is because those on the other end stopped transmitting.  As the Enterprise enters the system they find a vessel from the colony heading straight towards the sun.  They try to hail the doomed ship and race to intercept it before can get to that star.  They fail but right before the vessel is destroyed they here over the communications system the pilot exclaiming that he is now free. 
On Deneva

The Enterprise then goes to Deneva and Captain Kirk organizes a landing party with himself, Mr. Spock, Dr. McCoy and a number of redshirts.  When they beam down to the planet they are attacked by a group of men while they attack also say they don’t want to hurt the Enterprise crewmembers but their actions complete with the clubs they weld shows otherwise.  The gang however brought clubs to a phaser fight and the Enterprise crewmembers pull out their phasers and stun the group.  Dr. McCoy notices that evening unconscious the men’s metabolism is hyper accelerated.

  Captain Kirk leads the away team to his brother’s lab.  In there he finds his sister-in-law hysterical near crazy to the point she has to be sedated by Dr. McCoy.   The Captain’s nephew is unconscious on the floor and when Kirk approaches his brother he finds the scientist dead.  Kirk is clearly distraught by the death of his only sibling but he has no time to mourn for they’re clearly still in danger. 
George Samuel Kirk, Jr.  dead

The Captain returns the ship with Dr. McCoy and his surviving relatives.   Aurelan Kirk is briefly revived; her vitals are all over the place.  She screams that they entered their bodies and force them to build ships.  She screams in pain and ultimately dies leaving Peter Kirk and orphan.  With no further use for him in sick bay the Captain returns to the planet.
Away team encounters some nasty creatures

On the surface Spock and the away team have located some of the creatures responsible for the havoc.   They are nasty disgusting things.  Single celled organisms that looked like giant bags of fake vomit.  With phasers set the kill they blaster creatures only to fine the phaser beams have little to no effect. With intense maximum phaser fire they manage to briefly stun one.  Spock wants to take it is a sample, but the Captain elects to retreat.   While the landing party is retreating the creature that was hit revives and attacks Spock.  They beam up and get Mr. Spock to sick bay.

Dr. McCoy tries his best but finds his body is infested with so many smaller versions of the creatures they saw that on the planet.  It’s like the thing had his babies in Spock and they are all growing.  Dr. McCoy can’t remove all them without killing his patient.  The problem is the same for all the citizens of the colony.
Nasty stuff
 When Mr. Spock wakes up he is deliriously tries to take control the ship. He escapes from sick bay makes it all the way to the bridge and almost succeeds to take control of the helm.   Several officers all have to tackle him at once until Dr. McCoy knocks him out with a hypospray.  When he comes to in sick bay he notices he is physically restrained.  Tells the Captain that that is not necessary and he is now once again in control although he is still in pain.  He request to be let out.  Kirk says that may be an option if he can demonstrate that he’s in control however he’s not sure how long that may be.

Alone in sick bay he mutters that he is in control of his emotions and he is in control of his pain.  He breaks out and heads to the transporter room however he is stopped by the quick actions of Mr. Scott.  When Kirk arrives he explains that they still need to get a sample from the planet surface and says he is already infected he is the best choice to go.  Seeing as he went to the transporter room to head of the surface and not to the bridge take control the ship Kirk sees that is a sign that he is now mentally well and chooses to trust him.  Spock successfully goes down to the planet and retrieves a sample by capturing one of the creatures and bringing it back to the ship to be studied in the sick bay.
Spock fighting to get control of the bridge

Upon studying them Mr. Spock and Dr. McCoy are able to determine that these creatures are all part of a collective.  They are in essence a single entity the difference between this creature and us is it doesn’t keep all of it cells together the same place.  Each cell is part of the whole creature that is why phaser fire was unable to affect it.  What the creature does is it infects its victims growing new cells their bodies and using the new cells’ placement to cause pain to the host.  If the host does not do exactly as instructed the pain will become more intense.  Creature has its hosts build ships after gets done wiping out all life on that planet it uses the ships to proceed to the next one.

It appears in order to save the rest of the galaxy from this creature the Enterprise would have to render the planet lifeless from orbit killing all the inhabitants.  Spock says that he and Peter Kirk will have to go down to the planet and be sacrificed with the colony.  Spock does not want to do this but he doesn’t see any other solution as they haven’t been able to come up with an effective way of destroying the parasitic creature.  Kirk refuses he says there’s going to be another answer.  He mentions the pilot who flew into the sun at the start of the episode and points out that the last thing he said was he was free.  Kirk reasons that there was something in the sun that could be used to fight this creature.
Race against time
Spock and McCoy continue to work on it they try to think what elements the sun has and test that on the sample cell that they have.  McCoy tries radiation and heat nothing however is working.  Time is running out and Spock is afraid they may have to revert to the original plan.  While trying to brainstorm over the sun’s elements Kirk, the non-scientist, is the one to come up with the most obvious answer that his scientists colleagues weren’t able to think of.  What if it is light that destroys the creature?

McCoy sets up the experiment using the single cell of the creature that they have and exposes it to intense light.  It works but now they had to try on a subject who is a person like themselves who has been infected.  Mr. Spock volunteers, McCoy wants to give him goggles but Spock refuses as those on the surface will not have goggles.  Spock is exposed to the intense light and he is cured of his infection unfortunately he is also left blind. 
A victory of sorts!
 They run some test and Dr. McCoy’s discover some bad news and good news simultaneously.  Just like there are sounds that we cannot hear there is light that we cannot see and light that is on a wavelength we can’t see is sufficient to kill the creature. So they won’t have to blind everyone on the planet but it also means that Spock’s sacrifice was unnecessary.

The Enterprise drops satellites in orbit around the planet and uses those satellites to create light beyond the visible spectrum that is intense enough to wipe the creature from existence.  Peter Kirk also cured.  There is also some more good news; Mr. Spock’s blindness was temporary since Vulcans have an inner eyelid that they evolved to protect against the intense Vulcan sun.  Which I suppose made it illogical for him to refuse the goggles after all the humans on that planet didn’t have inner eyelids to protect them from bright light but since it wasn’t necessary to use visible light anyway is all academic.  Dr. McCoy was so worried about his Vulcan eyes so much that Kirk pointed out to the Doctor that he forgot about the Vulcan ears and Mr. Spock heard all those nice things that Dr. McCoy was saying about him.

Additional thoughts: Poor Captain Kirk this has to be the worst week in his entire life.  Just last episode he had to watch the love of his life die and if he prevented it then that would’ve been the end of the world that he knows.  As if the universe had thought he hadn't suffered enough however this week he gets to lose his big brother and lose him in a very horrific way.  Death by some alien creature that caused him to suffer intense pain before his death and he died knowing his wife and child were going through the same thing that he was.  Kirk then gets to watch his sister-in-law die and see his nephew suffer.  Then he’s told that for the good of the universe he may have to kill millions of people, including his best friend and nephew.  That last thing was avoided but I think our good Captain deserves another trip to the fantasy shore leave planet for at least a month to help him recover for everything that he’s been going through.

So what do we call this thing that they were fighting?  The planet-hopping vomit-looking creature that travels all it cells traveling independently.  I’m thinking vomit parasite.  Why can’t everything strange we encounter in space be like the Horta which was apparently ugly to but turned out to be very lovely; where this thing was just plain old nasty.   Also why it was immune to phaser fire just because each cell was separate?  That didn’t make a lot of sense to me.  Cells of my body are destroyed by contact with things every day I don’t see why it would be much different here.

Back in the episode “What Are Little Girls Made Of” we first learn about Kirk’s brother and his family from Kirk’s evil android doppelgänger.  However that episode it is said that Kirk’s brother has three sons.  So my question is where are Kirk’s other nephews?  Why do we only see the one?  I guess that Peter is probably his parents’ youngest child.  He seems to be about 12 so if is siblings were separated by about three years his brothers should be 15 and 18 respectively.  So perhaps the 18-year-old is often college in the 15-year-old is visiting him?  That’s the only explanation I can think of at the moment.

However of the nephew why don't we see what becomes of him?  The whole episode Kirk is trying to save his life and yet we don’t see what happens to him after he loses both of his parents.  The kid is now an orphan; shouldn’t his uncle be trying to help him out?  I read there was actually a scene about this but it didn’t make the final cut.  If so, that is too bad because it leaves the viewers wondering.  Maybe Peter goes to live with his brothers?  Is Kirk’s mother still alive at this point?  Maybe Peter can go live with his grandmother?

FINAL GRADE 4 of 5