Friday, July 21, 2023

SPOCK RUNS INTO A SPACE KAREN

 


Name: Vulcan!

Author: Kathleen Sky

Publication Date: 9/1978

Publisher: Bantam Books

Page Number: 175

Historian’s Note:  Sometime between The Counter-clock Incident and The Motion Picture

Cast of Characters:  Captain James T. Kirk       Commander Spock              Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”       Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Nyota Uhura              Lieutenant Kyle                Lieutenant Angela Mendoza          Lieutenant Jeff Williams                    Dr. Ruth Rigel             Nurse Christine Chapel          Nurse Angela Dickinson        Ensign Pavel Chekov      Ensign Theodore Lowrey            Ensign Donald Ackroyd            Ensign Octavio Hernandez          Ensign Alan Huff              Ensign Bill Johnson           Ensign Sikh            Ensign Rosaly Ybarra             Engineer Shigeda             Engineering Technician Hans Mueller       Crewman Fitzgerald          Crewman Jefferies          Crewman Martin      Dr. Katalya Tremain           Ambassador Sarek       Commodore David Stone                Captain Selik         Commander Maximinus Thrax       Licinius Thrax

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, Starbase 11, the Romulan Bird of Prey ChR Decius, USS Calypso unknown registry number

Planets: Arachnae

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The story starts out with an unusual premise: the Romulan Neutral Zone, which we first learned of in “Balance of Terror”, is moving.   The book explains that when the treaty was being hammered out by diplomats they marked the territory of space that each power was to have and the Neutral Zone by using magnetic field strengths that no one expected to change for hundreds of years.  (By which time with any luck the Federation and the Romulan Star Empire would have long solved their differences.)  However some frequent ion storms have caused these magnetic fields to alter changing the once permeant boundary.  In the immediate term that means that the planet Ararchnae is going to be now part of Romulan space.  As to their knowledge there is no immediate concern as no intelligent life has been discovered.  However there are some on the Federation Council who feel that there might be and we shouldn’t allow those poor souls to fall into Romulan hands  They have sent over a famous biologist who McCoy says is “the best thing to happen to biology since Darwin” to help determine if there are any lifeforms worth protecting.  

Spock and McCoy preparing for Tremain

As soon as she beams aboard Tremain reveals herself to be a major racist space Karen.  She looks at Spock and refuses to participate in a mission with him.  After intervention of Captain Kirk and Commodore Stone, who is Kirk’s CO from “Court Martial” and also Tremain’s boyfriend, she is forced to go along with the mission.  When she is not around Vulcans, Tremain is actually a very pleasant and interesting person.  McCoy even finds himself falling in love with her in spite of her clear bigotry.   McCoy decides to research this under his duty to evaluate all incoming personnel as Chief Medical Officer.  He discovers her husband served on the USS Calypso, under the command of Captain Selik.  Selik was a Vulcan who had served in Starfleet for 40 years.  His ship encountered some parasitic lifeforms who started to “eat” their ship causing everything to break down.  With a rescue ship to far away and the risk of such a ship also getting infected the Captain decided to order the ship to self-destruct. 

McCoy tires to present his findings to the Captain and First Officer, but it turns out his research was a little short.  Spock had already found out about the husband, and unlike McCoy continued to research where he learned of Tremain’s parents also being on that ship.  This makes McCoy feel like a fool and Kirk is not happy.  Elsewhere the bigots of the Enterprise (I can’t believe I said that) all approach Tremain looking to make her their leader.  She tells them that they are all stupid and takes the time to explain to each one why they are so.  Tremain’s is a lot more charismatic than the traditional bigot. (I will talk more about that in my additional thoughts section.)  In sickbay, Chapel gives Tremain a piece of her mind and in doing so does more to embarrass Spock than anything Tremain could do.  It reminds me of the Mantis tries to defend Drax in Guardians 3.



In the final analysis Kirk and McCoy agree that although Tremain’s attitude and bigotry would prevent her from a regular posting on the Enterprise, given her expertise and the time sensitivity of their mission she will suffice long enough to get the mission done.  Kirk assigns both Spock and Tremain to joint command of the mission.  Tremain remains unhappy about it.

The landing party heads down to the planet and sets up camp as they get ready to observe the native Arachnians.  However, in a short period of time their camp is over run by a group of Arachnians.  Nearly everyone in the party is killed, two are severally wounded, and only Spock and Tremain escape unscathed.  They request an emergency beam out but the Romulans have entered this system and the Enterprise has its shields up and cannot help them.  

Kirk tires to reason with the Romulans but they are not listening.  The reasons for the Romulans’ refusal are that given their past encounters they don’t trust Kirk, and internal Romulan politics.  The Commander’s family is on the out due to his second in command and son refusing to marry a proconsul’s daughter.   They have been given a mission with a high rate of failure: go against Captain Kirk.  In the meantime Spock and Tremain try to help their fallen crewmates.

Romulans have had many injuries against the hands of Kirk

The two injured landing party members die, which sours Kirk on the Romulans and starts talking with them a little less diplomatically.  To make matters worse Spock is injured by an Arachnian.  Spock is now dying of Archnian venom like his lost crewmates.  In an act of desperation Spock forces a mind meld with the Archnian.  This turns out to be a mistake because the Archnians are just animals just like many already thought, and Spock’s mind meld with such a creature makes him think he is one of them.  Despite her bigotry, Tremain decides to risk her own sanity to help Spock.  She puts her hand to his face and began the mind meld on herself.  This kills two birds with one stone.  Tremain is able to guide Spock back to sanity, and we learn the truth of Tremain’s bias.  Although the loss of her husband and parents under a Vulcan’s command was traumatic.  However the true loss was the Vulcan Captain himself.  She was already set to break up with her husband as their marriage was all but officially over.  She had found herself falling in love with their commanding officer but she never told him.  This led her never to want to be around anyone who reminded her of him creating her bias of all Vulcans.  After this mind meld therapy with Spock she resolves to change her ways.     

Mind melds can be helpful

Kirk decides despite the Romulans he will try to rescue them anyway.  He signals his intentions to the Romulans reminding them of the consequences if they are attacked.  The Romulans decide to let them try and monitored to make sure that was all they would do.  With his missing crewmembers returned Kirk tells the Romulans the planet is theirs and leaves but not before shouting off a few insults at their intelligence.  With Spock better he has a meeting with McCoy and Tremain to smooth everything over.  Tremain vows to resolve her issues with Vulcans but as far as romance goes she is not sure if she will be with Stone, McCoy, or anyone. 

Additional thoughts: The story begins with an interesting concept.  How would boundaries in space even work?  A two dimensional map about space is even worse than one about Earth.  How far up and around exist the boundary of the Neutral Zone between the United Federation of Planets and the Romulan Star Empire?  The idea that the treaty would create some natural markers that might seem long term but could later shift and change makes for a good story. 

So onto a small topic: Dr. McCoy’s rank.  In classic Star Trek McCoy was always a lieutenant commander.  I noted in my first Animated Series review about “More Tribbles, More Trouble” McCoy’s rank insignia was that of a commander.  I immediately wondered if McCoy had been promoted or if it was just an animation error.  There plenty of animation errors so it wasn’t absurd to think that, heck even the live action series had visual errors.  Mr. Spock wore the stripes of a full commander all through season 1, but he was also promoted to that rank off screen before the start of season 2.  In this book Tremain’s rank is given as a full commander and it is stated that she has the same rank of both Spock and McCoy.  So it looks like the country doctor got promoted.

Dr. McCoy, a full commander

McCoy finds Tremain very attractive and desirable, but he detests her attitude toward Spock and he knows so long as it exists she is not someone he can have a future with.  It’s a good show of solidarity between McCoy and Spock.  McCoy may like to tease Spock about being a Vulcan but he shuts up about it after Tremain demonstrates her intolerance.  He is not going to give her an inch so she can take a mile.  I do like how the author made Tremain a compelling character in spite of her bigotry.  It is very easy to get into the mindset that all bigots are KKK members, it does us a disservice because we may not feel the need to examine some of our own beliefs since bigots are just the “bad” people.  When McCoy is talking with Tremain alone he and the reader find her to be such a fascinating and charismatic person, until the subject of Vulcans comes up.  The whole thing reminds me of a biography I read about John F. Kennedy.  While he was in the Senate, Kennedy would befriend these Southern Senators who he would find that they would have shared mutual interests; he would have interesting discussions with them, and find them pleasant company.  Until the subject of African-Americans came up, and then Kennedy told his aides they transformed into different people. 

  Tremain tells McCoy he was wrong about the death of her husband causing her distain because the love was out of their marriage and the term was going to expire.  The very concept of a term marriage is interesting.  You don’t have to worry about a nasty divorce.  If it’s not working out then you simply don’t renew. 

I found the failed recruitment of Tremain by the bigots of the Enterprise an interesting read.  Tremain puts every one of them in their place from the Admiral’s baby to the I-am-jealous-of-Chapel-Nurse.  Is it just me or does Engineer Shigeda belong in the Terran Empire of the mirror universe?  

Now Starfleet is not exactly a military organization but it’s structured like one.  To me you would think a joint command is a bad idea.  I mean who is the person who you hold accountable.  It is like a ship having two captains. Then on top of that you make the joint commanders two people who hate each other.  Personally I thought Kirk would make Tremain the final word on the area of expertise and Spock should be in charge of the overall mission.  Clearly Kirk should think about it since the joint command ended with everyone under them getting killed.

Now it was clear that the Romulan Star Empire is based on the Roman Empire.  They have similar titles and their home worlds are Romulus and Remus. This book takes that a bit farther by giving the Romulans all Romanized names.  Where elsewhere in the franchise their names sound similar to Vulcans, but here they are Maximinus and Licinius Thrax.

I mentioned earlier that McCoy ceased his teasing of Spock the moment Tremain started her attack.  It was interesting to have Spock’s internal monologue compare the two.  Despite her intense bigotry or maybe because of it, Spock actually enjoys goading her more than McCoy.  Originally this book was a draft for a potential episode now clearly the book format allows for a more in depth story than a sixty-minutes-plus-commercials episode but I would have loved to see Spock vs. Tremain live action. 

One of the best parts of the book to me was in the way the Romulans talk about Kirk to themselves.  To them Kirk is horror who can’t be trusted and will pull victories out of the thin air through treachery.  The Commander even suspects the Proconsul may have set this up on purpose to get rid of him King David style. Considering what happened in both “The Deadly Years” and “The Enterprise Incident” I don’t blame the Romulans for not trusting Kirk at all.  One of the flaws I found it the book “The Price of the Phoenix” was the Romulans, especially our favorite lady commander, where a little too nice and friendly given their history together.  

Spock’s attempted mind meld with the Arachnian and the consequence reminded me of the short story “The Hunting” in the first New Voyages volume.  I don’t know if the author read that story but it was a nice consistency. 

The most amazing part of this story was its end.  In a more traditional Star Trek story we would have learned that Arachnians were true intelligent and just a different type of intelligence like the Horta from “The Devil in the Dark.”  This would force Kirk to find a way to win freedom for the planet for the Romulans at the last minute.  But no, they are just dumb animals and Kirk just lets them have the planet because it was worthless.  Too bad for everyone who got red-shirted for a planet that was useless to the Federation.     

Should it be canon: Yes, I think this a great story; it is a self-contained adventure like any traditional Star Trek episode, so it doesn’t step on the toes of any other established canon.  I cannot see any reasonable objection. 

Cover Art: The cover has McCoy, Tremain, and Spock on the bottom of the cover.  Tremain is to McCoy’s right (viewer’s left), Spock is on the other side.  Spock’s image is larger than the other two.  Above them is a native Arachnian.

Final Grade: Final Grade 5 of 5

 

Friday, June 30, 2023

AFTER AMOK

 Name: Star Trek: The New Voyages 2 – Story 10 “Soliloquy”

Author: Marguerite B. Thompson

Publication Date: 1/1978

Publisher: Bantam Books

Page Number: 2

Historian’s Note: During Amok Time   

Cast of Characters:  Commander Spock             

Starships and/or Starbases: none

Planets: none

My Spoiler filled summary and review: This section is just a single poem that follows:

My father gave no work of love to me.

My mother practiced laudable restraint.

My Vulcan childhood lessons logically

Prepared me to despise the human taint.

I could not blame T’Pring; I saw that she

Let flawless logic over pledge prevail.

For she would stop at nothing to be free

Wisely to mate with a pure Vulcan male.

Human tormentors do not understand

Acknowledgement of feeling causes pain,

Cruelly subvert defenses I had planned,

Plot to anesthetize my watchful brain.

What will they find when I am ripped apart?

“I love you, Captain,” written on my heart.

Additional thoughts: Like with my reviews of “Sonnet from the Vulcan: Omicron Ceti III” and “Elegy for Charlie,” I must confess to have no talent when it comes to judging any type of poem.  I will be breaking it down for its Star Trek content alone.

                It is interesting that, according to the editor’s introduction, Thompson wrote and submitted this shortly after the earlier mentioned “Sonnet.”  I don’t know if that was because she felt filled with positive inspiration to make a poem just as magical or she was an overly enraged Spirk pusher who was highly offended at making Leila Kalomi Spock’s one true love and she needed to correct the narrative. I think it was probably the former but you never know. 

Personally, I think Spock's one true love was Zarabeth not Lelia

                The work begs the question of “who is Spock speaking to?”  I think it is actually no one. I place this into the mess of that was in Spock’s head from the moment he realized he “killed” Kirk to the moment he finds out the truth in Sickbay.  In fact, I imagine the transporter trip up was the longest he ever experienced.  It would be the perfect place for this internal monologue.

T'Pring act of treachery 

                 The monologue covers everything about Spock.  His parents’ actions as well as his own interpretation of the world he grew up on caused him to despise his human traits. How this self-hatred allows him to forgive T’Pring and not blame her.  He should blame her as she is a heartless prick who tried to manipulate two friends into killing one another in order to get the traumatized one to just let her go and so she can be with her lover.  It’s not that she wanted to break up with Spock that was the problem it is that she could have done it a different way that didn’t involve killing someone. (I say a lot about that in my review of “Amok Time.”) The poem ends with Spock’s shattered soul realizing that he killed his best friend and what that will make of him. 

Spock's worst day ever!

Should it be canon: I would say the events discussed already are canon.

Cover Art: As I stated from the first story:

The cover has the Enterprise flying in front of what appears to be a wrecked space station.  Both appear to be in orbit around a planet that you can see part of in the corner.  There is this red haze that surrounds everything.

Final Grade: Final Grade 3 of 5

 

Thursday, June 29, 2023

Morning for Charlie X

 


Name: Star Trek: The New Voyages 2 – Story 9 “Elegy for Charlie”

Author: Antonia Vallario

Publication Date: 1/1978

Publisher: Bantam Books

Page Number: 2

Historian’s Note: After the episode Charlie X   

Cast of Characters:  Charlie Evans      unknown narrator

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701

Planets: none

My Spoiler filled summary and review: This section is just a single poem that follows:

My sleep was disturbed by a weeping star

And a voice that I shouldn’t have heard

For the galaxy drifts in the coldness of space

Where dark is incredibly far,

(and a voice cannot come from a star)

O secretly grown, all alone

child-flower plucked from an alien soil

beneath an alien sun,

who wanted most what we could not give

forgive our helpless humanity;

we watched you taken from the bridge

forever lost from human love

and a life you were not meant to live,

The entire universe stretches beyond, and

I have no answers to give

save the words that I send to the galaxy’s end

to comfort a weeping star,

(for Charlie, wherever you are)

 

 

Additional thoughts: Like with my review of “Sonnet from the Vulcan: Omicron Ceti III” I must confess to have no talent when it comes to judging any type of poem.  I will be breaking it down for its Star Trek content alone.

Rand had some reason to feel sorry for him, but also some reasons not to

             The first thing I wonder while reading this is “who is this narrator?” My opening guess would be Yeoman Janice Rand, she had some sympathy for Charlie, tried her best to help him out, and was on the bridge to when he was taken away.  However, he started to stalk her and at one point blinked her into nonexistence.  So, I don’t think it would make much sense for her to overly morn for him.  Lt. Uhura is another possibility, she is a very empathic person and was on the bridge when Charlie disappeared. However, she wasn’t very close to him.  Could it be Captain Kirk?  To be fair, I mostly dismiss this because the words, to me, seem to be coming from a woman.  That could just because the author is a woman.  Kirk had sympathy, was on the bridge, and still tried to help Charlie when the Thasian comes to retrieve him.  Trying to claim that he belongs with his own people.  Kirk realized that was not possible, even when he said it.  So maybe this is Captain Kirk.
Could it be either Kirk or Uhura?

If someone was not familiar with “Charlie X,” the poem might mislead them into seeing him as blameless.  Charlie may have been sympathetic but he was a horrible monster to people. He treated the crew of the Enterprise, like they were mice that the cat torments before killing it.  The situation wasn’t entirely his fault but he still had a role to play.  I wrote this about him in my review of the episode:

   “As a character Charlie Evans is a fascinating creation.  The power of a God in the body of a teenage boy who has the maturity of a toddler, someone who only wanted to fit in but whose lack of maturity and empathy combined with his amazing abilities made that impossible.  Charlie does horrible things to people because of his lack of empathy and is consistent demands for affection that makes him easy to dislike but the viewer can’t help but feel somewhat sorry for him.  He reminds me of some experiments done in the decades after this episode was made on monkeys and chimpanzees who were raised to be human and taught sign language.  These apes never became human but with the way they were conditioned it was impossible for them to live as apes in the wild.  Charlie is like that he isn’t Thasian despite his abilities, but because of them he can’t be human either.”

He maybe innocent looking but he is not very nice

Should it be canon: I don’t see any part of this that isn’t already canon.

Cover Art: As I stated in the first story:

The cover has the Enterprise flying in front of what appears to be a wrecked space station.  Both appear to be in orbit around a planet that you can see part of in the corner.  There is this red haze that surrounds everything.

Final Grade: Final Grade 4 of 5

 

Monday, June 26, 2023

CAPTAIN KIRK TEAMS UP WITH A SUPERHUMAN AND STOPS ANTOHER AI


Name: Star Trek: The New Voyages 2 – Story 8 “The Sleeping God”

Author: Jesco von Puttkamer

Publication Date: 1/1978

Publisher: Bantam Books

Page Number: 51

Historian’s Note: Sometime after The Second Season of the Animated Series   

Cast of Characters:  Captain James T. Kirk         Commander Spock              Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Nyota Uhura          Lieutenant Endercott         Nurse Christine Chapel          Ensign Pavel Chekov      Admiral Olaf Sondergaard       Manda-Rao      Signa            Nagha

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, Columbus NCC-1701/2, unnamed Nagha sphere ship

Planets: Raga’s Planet, Nagha-Planet

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The adventure (and most sections of this story) begin from the point of view of the Nagha.  I think all readers will come the conclusion when they start that this Nagha is the sleeping god the title suggests. She is not, rather she is an ever growing and increasingly powerful artificial intelligence.  The Nagha overthrew the biologicals that created her and ultimately destroyed them.  Due to her experience with her creators, she decided that all biological life-forms were a threat and built fleets of sphere-shaped ships and sent out on mission of conquest and genocide throughout her universe.  She was extremely successful and then she figured out there was another universe.

                In our regular universe, the crew of the Enterprise receive unpleasant news of an unknown enemy attacking the Altair system in Federation space.  Altair VII is colony with millions of people living there.  No one knows who this new enemy is but they are doing a lot of damage.  It is not just the Federation who is under attack either, the Enterprise receives word that the Klingons are also suffering from these strangers from elsewhere.

Okay maybe not quite like this, but right shape

                As the Enterprise rushes to the Altair system to aid the starships USS Republic and USS Excelsior already there in battle with the enemy, they receive a priority communication from Starfleet. Admiral Sondergaard orders them to change course and head to Raga’s Planet to and pick up Signa, known to the locals as the “the Sleeping God.”  Starfleet considers Signa to be a prime asset and do not want him to fall to the enemy.  

                At this point Spock gives a long monologue where he explains the origins of Singa the Sleeping God. Singa was once human.  Spock explains, Singa’s family was of Indian descent and he was exploring space with them, over eighty years ago, when there was an accident on their nuclear-powered spacecraft.  This killed the entire complement of crew and passengers.  However, the nuclear radiation affected him differently.  He grew large, green, strong, and mean whenever he became angry.  Just kidding, that is not what Spock said. Spock explained he gained great mental powers and used them to stowaway aboard a ship looking to form a colony on Raga’s Planet.  Singa was adopted by all of the townspeople.  Signa later confides to the Elders of Raga’s Planet and to a representative of the Federation about his amazing abilities and wanted to use them to aid mankind.  The Federation came to regard Singa was one of its greatest assets.    But Singa had a slight problem, he wasn’t one of the those superhumans who was immortal.  He was aging just like anyone else. Within one generation his great mind and powers would be gone.  So, he came up with a solution.  He built a machine that would keep him in suspended animation but with access to his mental powers.  The farming community of Raga’s Planet formed a whole religion around their Sleeping God, and the Federation would help him while he helped the Federation when it needed.  Now Singa needed to be transported off planet and the Starfleet wasn’t going to say “no.”

                The Enterprise reaches Raga’s Planet and Singa, his suspended animation machine, and his priests who worship him are all brought aboard.  His chief priest, Manda-Rao, acts as a go between. No sooner did they have the Sleeping God secured, the ship came under attack.  One of the strange sphere-shaped ships that had been causing trouble all over showed up.  The Enterprise tried to fight but its attacks were ineffective.  Nevertheless, the enemy doesn’t destroy the Enterprise, it simply sees it as not a threat and moves onto its next target.  

Enterprise has to leave its sisters behind

                Under “normal” war circumstances Kirk should have the Enterprise give chase in order to try to stop it from killing millions of colonists along the way.  But Kirk has a killer instinct, one that served him well in “Balance of Terror” and not so well in “Arena.”  Kirk thinks instead of fighting them over here he should instead fight them over there.  (Anyone who was older than 10 during the 2001-2009 years will know what I am talking about.)  Kirk is determined to find the enemy’s homeworld and attack it.  They fly to a star system where they think it should be but discover there are no planets orbiting that star.  However, they do encounter another enemy ship and this time when they attack, they do some damage.  This seems to open a rip in space and Sulu sends the ship into and claims some outside force made him do it.  When they were through Kirk realized they were in a parallel universe.  I’m assuming this experience in “The Tholian Web” helped him recognize it.  There were planets in this new solar system that they were in. 

                Suddenly Kirk and the crew lost consciousness after the ship was seemingly jolted. When Kirk woke up, he found the ship nearly empty.  In a situation that must have given him flashbacks to “The Mark of Gideon” the only people he could find was a security officer still out on a sickbay bed, and the Sleeping God with his priest.  At first Kirk things that Singa might be dead, but it becomes clear when Manda-Rao speaks it is actually the Sleeping God who is talking.  Singa tells Kirk that their enemy took control of the crew’s minds and they all beamed down to the planet.

                Kirk takes the shuttlecraft Columbus down to the Nagha-Planet in search of his crew.  He finds Spock, who is strapped buck naked to a metal table. Then Kirk is captured by some robots and also stripped naked and tided up to a table next to him. Spock tells Kirk that they are going to be experimented on.  Kirk wonders if they are going to be dissected like frogs.  Spock confirms this and is also taken back by the irony of a science officer being part of a science experiment.  It is unlikely that their captor will suddenly realize their intelligence and free them like the alien did in the fourth story in this volume.

Kirk has been here before

                However, the Nagha is already doomed.  Kirk the Bane of All Artificial Intelligence has already set a plan in motion.  Kirk knew what the Nagha was going to do and acted like a trojan horse. While the Nagha had focused on Kirk, Sleeping God using the power of the Enterprise stuck at the Nagha where she was vulnerable destroying her and freeing our universe from her wrath. The crew all get back to the ship, they conclude that Nagha was behind everything from the start from getting the Admiral to order them to pick him up to taking control of Mr. Sulu at a key moment. It was now time to bring the Sleeping God home.       

Additional thoughts: Well, this a very fun story.  It’s not really that original.  The evil AI that has decided it knows better or no longer needs its creators is a story that had been told for over half a century by the time this book was published.  It is nevertheless a very solid Star Trek tail.  Its end is a bit rushed but that is to be expected with short stories.

                So Nagha had already conquered and exterminated all biological lifeforms in her universe. However, she dips her toe into our universe and gets her head handed to her. Apparently, in her own universe there is no one with the talent of Captain Kirk.  Here in this universe however he is the Bane of All Artificial Intelligence even when he is not aided by a Sleeping God person.  If Singa hadn’t been there than Kirk would have just talked Nagha into suicide.

Kirk is good at getting these things to kill themselves

                On a much lighter note, am I the only one who thought it was weird that Dr. McCoy had such a hard time believing Singa’s origin story?  McCoy insists that exposure to radiation can only make some into a Captain Pike. However, it is not like they haven’t seen things like this before. Granted, McCoy wasn’t on the ship for the Gary Mitchell adventure, but he must have heard about it.  He lives in a universe where this stuff is outright normal.

Should it be canon: I see no reason why it shouldn’t be.  It’s a great one act adventure.  Since the villain was destroyed, you don’t have to worry about any continuity issue.

Cover Art: As I stated in the first story:

The cover has the Enterprise flying in front of what appears to be a wrecked space station.  Both appear to be in orbit around a planet that you can see part of in the corner.  There is this red haze that surrounds everything.

Final Grade: Final Grade 5 of 5

 

Thursday, June 15, 2023

KIRK AND MOST OF HIS CREW SWITCH GENDERS

 


Name: Star Trek: The New Voyages 2 – Story 7 “The Procrustean Petard”

Author: Sondra Marshak and Myrna Culbreath

Publication Date: 1/1978

Publisher: Bantam Books

Page Number: 45

Historian’s Note: Clearly sometime after Turnabout Intruder    

Cast of Characters:  Captain James T. Kirk         Commander Spock              Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Nyota Uhura          Nurse Christine Chapel          Ensign Pavel Chekov      Ensign Ann Aronsen   Crewman Laura Breen      Crewman Brad Collins               Crewman Adams          Admiral Komack         Ambassador Tregarth         Kang

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, unnamed Klingon K't'inga-class battle cruiser, Starbase 11

Planets: Unnamed gender-changing planet

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The adventure begins with a landing party consisting of Kirk, Spock, McCoy, Uhura, and some security personnel.  They are running around an ancient city in ruins on a planet that was seemingly abandoned. Then they are all knocked out by some energy field.  Kirk wakes up first and finds himself turned into a woman. He has not been put into a woman’s body; his body has been transformed into a woman as if that was what he has always been. 

We always know landing parties are risky but not this much!

                It is not just the good Captain either.  McCoy is now also female, and like Kirk he is too is rated “hot” on the attractive scale.  Uhura is now a man.  The only difference is Spock who has remained his normal male self. If this were their only problem that would be great but it appears they are trapped, not the landing party, the entire starship Enterprise is trapped in orbit.   Nevertheless, they are able to go back to the ship easy enough.

                On the Enterprise, Kirk is having the hardest time dealing with his transformation.  Dr. McCoy thinks he will be fine as a woman as a doctor’s duty doesn’t change much.  However, now that he is a meek female, he is finding it difficult to command the respect from his crew that he was used too. Both Spock and McCoy doubt his ability to continue in such a state, but Kirk is determined to beat the odds.

                Spock surmises that this was a recreation planet like in “Shore Leave.” These aliens just had a very odd form of entertainment. While investigating the planet trying to find some way to reverse the procedure Kirk and the landing party run into their old adversary and later reluctant ally, the Klingon Commander Kang.  Kang torments the Captain by referring to him as “Miss Kirk” taking credit for their condition.  Uhura also discovers that several of the crew have gone missing.  These crewmembers are all found gender swapped as well.

From adversary to ally once again!

                Considering they had parted on good terms in “Day of the Dove,” Kirk is not only wondering how Kang had changed them but why.  Kirk gets an unexpected answer, he hasn’t.  Once again Kang and his crew are captured by the same thing that has captured the Enterprise.  It turns out after their last encounter Kang’s wife and science officer, Mara, has left him and joined a peace faction political group of the Klingon Empire.  Kang was so hurt he made sure that his next crew was all male.  Then they got caught in the force field of this planet and group by group his entire crew was transformed into females, with only Kang himself spared.  His crew was so embarrassed and ashamed that they went into hiding rather than face the crew of the Enterprise.  

                Scotty, being the miracle worker that he is, finds a way to break the Enterprise and the Klingon ship free.  Once this is accomplished the two ships head to Starbase 11 to see if there was any way to change the crews back to the way they were.  The two gender changed crews have no way of physically distinguishing themselves between those who had their gender naturally by biology.  Spock and Kang were changed just less so then the others.  They had an extra-Y chromosome making them hyper aggressive.  However, as a Klingon that helped Kang and Spock was able to use his Vulcan discipline to control it.

Mr. Spock always in control even when he gets an extra Y and Kirk becomes a lady!

                Once someone had their gender changed the planet would not change them back even if their ship beamed them down their directly.  Kirk has an idea.  He doesn’t think the planet has a way to tell if a ship that entered orbit was a ship that had returned or not.  So, they should just go back to the planet with only those who changed aboard and the planet should change them back.  There is an issue of the unchanged male.  They theorize that Spock and Kang weren’t changed because they are the strongest on their respective ship.  If they were to go back, they may acquire a third Y-chromosome.  Spock thinks the risk is acceptable but Breen, one of the females turned male, who is now the physically strongest of all of those who changed volunteers to remain male.  Breen rather likes being male so she doesn’t consider it a sacrifice.  Collins also chooses to stay female.  The plan works and everyone is back to the way they want to be.  Kirk speculates that they will have to come back to the planet to figure out a way to develop countermeasures and warn other ships.   

Additional thoughts: Well, so where do we start?  Before I begin with any critiquing, I want to talk about what I like about the story. First, I do like the concept.  Star Trek often likes to work with metaphor through science fiction and exploring the social and physical differences between the sexes is clearly with in their mandate to tell a story about. One of the reasons they thought the planet might have been recreational is because as McCoy points out, as long as its temporary, who wouldn’t want to explore how the other side lives.  It is interesting not too long ago there was this gender swap app making its way through social media. Everyone was looking to see their favorite celebrities as the opposite gender.  William Shatner himself, sharing an image of lady Captain Kirk even said, “I would do me.”

Image all over the Internet and very fit for this story!

                Some of the things I enjoyed the most were as follows.  Captain Kirk waking up in a female body and instantly recognizing that he was in a female body without even looking down was great.  Since this happened in “Turnabout Intruder” he should already be aware of the sensation.  I really enjoyed the use of the chess code trick that Kirk and Scotty use first in “Whom Gods Destroy.”  I like that Kirk was confused as to why Kang would even want to something like this to him, considering how they were helpful to each other in their original encounter.  I also thought it was hilarious that both he and McCoy were “hot” as women.  Because why not?

                Speaking of Kang, there comes a rather weird point in this story (Yeah, I know everything about this story is weird.  We’re speaking relatively.) where it seems that Kang and Lady Kirk almost hook up.  Fortunately, Spock shows up before anything can happen.  It is actually interesting that their sexual orientation changed (or did it remain the same) along with their physical bodies. If Kirk were a heterosexual woman hooking up with Kang would clearly be within the norms of Captain Kirk behaviors.

                I also thought Kirk’s grand plan had a few holes in it. He comes to the conclusion that the Enterprise is the only ship that ever managed to escape from there.  They didn’t encounter any other stuck ships while they were in there, unlike the episode “The Time Trap.” So how can come to that conclusion?  He then adds “or at least never came back.” (p.188) Again, how could be possibly know?  This seem to me to be one hell of a guess.  It turns out to be right but that is do more to the strength of plot armor than anything else.

                By far the worst part of this book is how it incorporated the worst part of “Turnabout Intruder.” Of course, I am referencing the highly institutional sexist Starfleet that won’t allow women to be captains. To be fair the story makes it clear that the prohibition is not actually law.  Kirk says in protest, when it is suggested, he can no longer command since he has a woman’s body, “No law that says I can’t. Law says I can.” (p.160) However despite the law the story made it clear that women rarely make the rank of captain and if they do, they are mostly given desk jobs.  Now in fairness to the authors the next few decades of Star Trek hadn’t happened yet.  So, they are only building off of the material they have.  But to me “Turnabout Intruder” should have been treated as the anomaly considering it completely contradicted what had come before. I find it absurd as it has been established in “The Cage” and confirmed in “The Menagerie” both parts one and two, that the Enterprise once had a woman as the First Officer. If you can be first officer it’s absurd to say you can’t be captain, as one of the first officer’s roles is to be the back-up captain.

                When you come down to it the story is a rather pessimistic view of the struggle for women’s equality.  That in the 23rd century women are still struggling to get a seat at the table.  At one point Kirk’s internal monologue even suggests he might consider becoming a women’s liberation advocate now that he is a woman, joking to himself that he would be the movement’s strangest champion.

                The thing is much like “Turnabout Intruder” the whole “sexist Starfleet’ isn’t even necessary for the story.  Janice Lester can still be a jealous former lover who covets what her ex-boyfriend has, and is so mentally unstable that she is willing to for him to swap bodies to do it.  In this story it is suggested that since Kirk did not grow up and did not come up the ranks as a woman, he isn’t adjusted well enough in this body to operate in his normal capacity.  I imagine if I woke up in a different body overnight, I might have trouble adapting as well.  

Should it be canon: No.  It is a fun story. However, given the extremely sexist and patriarchal way Starfleet and the Federation are depicted, it flies in the face of the rest of the franchise that has developed over the last six decades.    

Cover Art: As I stated in the volume's first story:

The cover has the Enterprise flying in front of what appears to be a wrecked space station.  Both appear to be in orbit around a planet that you can see part of in the corner.  There is this red haze that surrounds everything.

Final Grade: Final Grade 4 of 5

 

Tuesday, June 6, 2023

THE BLUE QUIET

 



Name: Star Trek: The New Voyages 2 – Story 6 “Marginal Existence”

Author: Connie Faddis

Publication Date: 1/1978

Publisher: Bantam Books

Page Number: 20

Historian’s Note: Sometime after The Second Season of the Animated Series   

Cast of Characters:  Captain James T. Kirk         Commander Spock              Dr. Leonard H. McCoy AKA “Bones”              Lieutenant Commander Montgomery Scott AKA “Scotty”        Lieutenant  Hikaru Sulu              Lieutenant Nyota Uhura          Lieutenant Horst Gorshim           Lieutenant Elva Vigeland     Nurse Christine Chapel          Ensign Pavel Chekov      unnamed  blue aliens

Starships and/or Starbases: USS Enterprise NCC-1701, shuttlecraft Discovery Registry unknown and one unnamed shuttlecraft

Planets: unnamed planet

My Spoiler filled summary and review: The story begins with McCoy leading a landing party on a planet that has had most of its civilization vanish over six hundred years ago.  Yet in an abandoned city they have found life support pods set up for suspended animation. The people inside look like Andorians, but without the antenna.  Some of the people in there are still alive.  Excitement soon turns to terror as they are attacked.

Kirk is going to have to rescue McCoy

                The Enterprise was busy with studying a supernova.  When McCoy’s shuttlecraft did not make the rendezvous, Kirk left Scotty in command of the ship while he, Spock, and another landing party would take a second shuttlecraft to find them.  When the second landing party arrives and they enter the building.  Mr. Spock quickly concludes that the pods are for suspended animation.  Chapel and Chekov find a local young man who is completely non-verbal, a trait that seems common among the indigenous of this area.

Spock chooses to go with Kirk so Scotty takes command.

                The find the three crewmembers who were missing in the pods as well, except they weren’t doing well.  Spock and Chapel are able to save McCoy and Vigeland but Gorshim was too far gone. The landing party find itself attacked by the silent natives on the outside but also by a robot that tries to put them in the pods on the inside.  The robot is triggered by sound. 

Spock later concludes that the outside natives were descendants of those who refused to enter the pods six hundred years ago or had otherwise escaped at some later date.  Since the robots are triggered by sound the inhabitants evolved their society a nonverbal culture.  Kirk wants Spock to wake one up and they are attacked by the robot.   In the battle Kirk is knocked unconscious, when he wakes Chekov informs him that Spock was able to pull him out of there.  Spock managed to find the central computer and revive those in the pods.  With the tyranny of the robots at an end they head back to the Enterprise.  

Additional thoughts: This was a fun little story.  The only real complaint I have about it is its short length requires everything be solved rather quickly.  There was a lot of buildup that did not follow with a great deal of reward.  For example, it would have been fun to hear from of the recently released humanoids. 

                This does seem to be a huge prime directive violation though and that is mentioned once.  However, Kirk could probably get away with it with his selective interpretation of "developing" civilization.  With Spock waking all the survivors up that line is well crossed. I do like the references to the Botany Bay and the events from “Space Seed.”

This is a little too familiar 

                Kirk did not talk the machine into killing itself this adventure.  The in-story reason however was the machine was not smart enough to be talked into suicide.  Kirk compares the computer to the old IBM 360, which in the real world had been discontinued the same year this volume was published. It is clearly not an AI.         

Should it be canon: I see no reason why it shouldn’t be.  It’s a self-contained story that fits right in.

Cover Art: As I stated in the first story:

The cover has the Enterprise flying in front of what appears to be a wrecked space station.  Both appear to be in orbit around a planet that you can see part of in the corner.  There is this red haze that surrounds everything.

Final Grade: Final Grade 3 of 5